Darkjak3000 Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 well this is my first post and my first set of cards but hope you like them.also any suggestions would be appreciated. got the pics off google Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowcraft Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 NO ATTACHMENTS, please learn how to post them as images.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 *sigh* No attachments allowed, why do we have to say this to everynew guy! *Calls J-Max* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkjak3000 Posted December 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 sorry fixed now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monkey Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Images either have bad quality or are completely overused. Your OCG is horrendous. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dapichu Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 1.the type has their last name!?? put there "ninjutsu, genjutsu or weapons" at least....2. there are some errors, like "sacrifice" instead of tribute, and "sacrifice" instead of pay LP.3.Also, you can write "condition for summoning" or something like that and then ,its effect; or write "this card requieres X tribute to be normal summoned / this card requieres no tribute to be normal summoned".Anyways, jutsu cards has good effects. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkjak3000 Posted December 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 thanks i wasn't paying attention to OCG i was just making them for fun.as for types i was thinking changing it to the village they belong to eg. leaf Missing ninja and akatsuki.thanks for the advice i'll try and fix up the errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 12, 2008 Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Oh...My...God...So...Many...Errors...0.../...10... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fizzy™ Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 There are some errors.Nice try though .For your first go = 6-7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 They're okay. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 last one has teh words 'Effect:' in the actual effect? what?????? OP, bad OCG, duplicate pics etc. the general points of bad cards. the only goo thing is that there in the right thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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