LiAM Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 [align=center]Ritual Monster + ritual spell card. Ultima Revenge Mech [spoiler= Card Text] This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Mecha Revenge Ritual". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, inflict 500 points of Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points. .Mecha Revenge Ritual [spoiler=Card Text:]This card is used to Ritual Summon 1 "Ultima Revenge Mecha". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field. Rate/ Hate/ Comment[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yami Atten Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 These r alright1. good pic 9/102. nice use of ' dimensions ' 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 Post the Mech card when you're done with it, besides that, very good with the effect of the Monster and the Image of the Ritual Spell card looks awesome! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 Post the Mech card when you're done with it' date=' besides that, very good with the effect of the Monster and the Image of the Ritual Spell card looks awesome! 8/10[/quote'] what do you mean? its already there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
splatt Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 GOOD: Great picture for your monster, balanced effect and balanced ATK/DEF. BAD:Remove the "You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field." from your "Ultima Revenge Mech." That is not needed in the monster card, only in the Ritual Spell Card. In the Ritual Spell, it would be better if you also added "your hand" too. "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Ultima Revenge Mech". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand." That way your opponent doesn't have to sacrifice all his monsters from the field. Picture(s): 8/10Effect: 9/10Usefulness:7/10 (Good for a beat-down, machine deck but not much use in others.) Overall: 8/10 Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 GOOD: Great picture for your monster' date=' balanced effect and balanced ATK/DEF. BAD:Remove the "You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 8 or more as a Tribute from the field." from your "Ultima Revenge Mech." That is not needed in the monster card, only in the Ritual Spell Card. In the Ritual Spell, it would be better if you also added "your hand" too. "This card is used to Ritual Summon "Ultima Revenge Mech". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 8 or more from the field or your hand." That way your opponent doesn't have to sacrifice all his monsters from the field. Picture(s): 8/10Effect: 9/10Usefulness:7/10 (Good for a beat-down, machine deck but not much use in others.) Overall: 8/10 Good job. it is needed, look at black luster solider. its needed on card and from hand makes it easier to summon, fromfield is best, so your last 2 points are wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
splatt Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 I believe it's older cards that have it, and newer ones that don't, but I guess it's up to you. I was only informing you of changes that have been made. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Black_Luster_Soldier As you can see, black luster soldier is very old, it doesnt even have an ID number in the bottom-left-hand corner. Other newer cards do have a number and don't have the tribute effect, it is located on their ritual spells. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Super_War-Lionhttp://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Demise%2C_King_of_Armageddonhttp://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Elemental_Mistress_Doriado As for only being able to tribute from the field, most, if not all, ritual spell cards that exist to this day, say from your hand or field. http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/War-Lion_Ritualhttp://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/End_of_the_Worldhttp://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Doriado%27s_Blessing Again, this is all up to the cardmaker, I guess, but your cards playability/usefullness will deteriorate drastically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 the ritual spell name isnt too creative... other than that its really good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 9, 2008 Report Share Posted December 9, 2008 Really nice pics and effects, no OCG problems. 11/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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