Careless Whisper Posted December 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Wait' date=' one man is going to kill the whole world?[/quote'] I didn't say that he'd kill the entire world....He's just facing the entire world to clear his bounty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 well at least give SOME people who'd take sympathy on him. Otherwise being hunted by everyone he could see makes things very untenable Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prince Poison Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Meh, from the looks of it it's not gonna be a very interesting book. With some guy fighting against the whole world, it looks alot like some videogame....Maybe it's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest PikaPerson01 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 ' pid='1452744' dateline='1228971069']Sounds like one big cliche to me. This. Relate-able characters >>>> Super powerful, super intelligent, moody emo bastards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Who are you to assume that I would get angry.. If I get turned down then I'll go to someone else. This story is not overdone' date=' I've already had comments on the progress being one of the most original plot lines. That's just the progress, this book is supposed to be a big hit for me.[/quote'] because, you got ridiculously pissed over something stupid on SAW and YCM a while ago and since this is gonna be a 400 page book, it would be quite brutal. And this story is very overdone especially among video games. Even if this book got published it would have a ridiculously bad age range. The only people that would buy this book would be 14 or 15 year old emo kids. Do you honestly see adults reading this book? No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Who are you to assume that I would get angry.. If I get turned down then I'll go to someone else. This story is not overdone' date=' I've already had comments on the progress being one of the most original plot lines. That's just the progress, this book is supposed to be a big hit for me.[/quote'] because, you got ridiculously pissed over something stupid on SAW and YCM a while ago and since this is gonna be a 400 page book, it would be quite brutal. And this story is very overdone especially among video games. Even if this book got published it would have a ridiculously bad age range. The only people that would buy this book would be 14 or 15 year old emo kids. Do you honestly see adults reading this book? No. Are you the one writing the book and are you the one who has complete controle on the type of drama that occurs within this book? I think not, I think I am. So, don't assume who this book will appeal to, in fact, this book, so far, already has alot of plot twists that has, so far, made every single one of my teachers, including the principle at my school, very interrested in the book. And I told them that if they only told me that the book was good in it's progress just to try to make me happy with it, then I would just stop writing it. However, all my teachers have also giving me alittle critique on it, so I know that they are in full knowledge that I prefer positive and some constructive feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 you may be planning to write for one person taking on virtually the entire world, are you going to give any supernatural abilities and all to this book? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 No.. Why would I give supernatural abilities!? That would make the entire book too unrealistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Write, and the fact that the entire war stiken world is looking for one man, instead of actually tying to kill eachother is realistic. President of USA: Let's kill this random guy instead of Hitler Hitler: Let's kill this random guy instead of Sir Winston Churchill Logical? No. Unrealistic? Yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Maybe I'm just waisting my time telling you about this ook then..since you're just going to try to discourage me from writing it. I say someone just lock this thread..since I can't have adecent story to tell you all about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 We still want you to write it, Meti Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Well, honestly, I can't wait to read it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 I just noticed this. Do you actually have Copyright over 'I Alone'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 I claim copyright over the title of the book. Why do you ask? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Maybe I'm just waisting my time telling you about this ook then..since you're just going to try to discourage me from writing it. I say someone just lock this thread..since I can't have adecent story to tell you all about. No we're pointing out the errors for you. Not one of us has said don't write it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 No, I asked 'Do you actually have copyright over 'I Alone'?' I want to know, as your title makes it seem as though you have already © the name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 I put that symbole so I can make sure anyone who tries to steal my idea gets caught easily. And yes..I already have copyrighted the Title and the plot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Interesting. Just out of personal interest and the fact that Ihave a set of titles/plots that I would like © over, how do I get said ©? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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