ricksta13 Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Card Lore: Reduce your life points by half. Draw cards from your deck until you have 3 machine type monster cards in your hand. Remove from play all the other cards drawn this turn. Special summon all 3 machine type cards from your hand to the field. Choose the ATK and DEF from one of the machine type cards and the effect from another. The chosen ATK, DEF, and effect become the ATK, DEF and effect of the third machine type card. The cards summoned by this effect with unaffected ATK, DEF, and effect are treated as equip spell cards and equipped to the other card summoned by this effect. If any cards summoned by this effect are removed from the field, remove all cards summoned by this effect from play.Card Lore: When this card is Normal summoned, Flip summoned, or Special summoned to the field, you can change the name of this card to any other card's name that exists in your deck, hand, or graveyard. If you choose to activate this card's effect, remove one other card in your deck, hand, or graveyard from play by the same name as this card. When this card is removed from the field, shuffle all cards removed from play by the effect of this card into where they immediately before the activation of this card's effect.This actually my first try at this. I've been scoping the forums for a while but I just started. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:ABC: Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 EEHH.. they're ok 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 I love Dark Assembler! It is epic! Very creative effect, nice picture. I also like Possessed Robot and Token Harvester. Mutant Amoeba has the potential to be uber-broken, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ricksta13 Posted December 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Can I get some constructive criticism? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Yes, you can. Change Mutant Amoeba's effect so it isn't so ungodly exploitable. Make it so you actually have to have the card in order to change its name. Like discard from your hand, remove from your graveyard, etc. Also, clarify that last line of Plasma Fiend, it's confusing. It sounds like it negates its own effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ricksta13 Posted December 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Thanks. I fixed them. (I think..) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 Not bad amazing pics 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 OCG errors: life points = Life Pointsdeck = Deckmachine type = Machine-TypeSpecial summon = Special Summonspell cards = Spell Cardsbattle phase = Battle Phaseface down = face-downface up = face-upgraveyard = GraveyardNormal summoned = Normal SummonedFlip summoned = Flip Summonedequip spell card = Equip Cardsum = total MANY, OCG errors. However, I like the pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:|Fallen|:. Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 OCG errors: life points = Life Pointsdeck = Deckmachine type = Machine-TypeSpecial summon = Special Summonspell cards = Spell Cardsbattle phase = Battle Phaseface down = face-downface up = face-upgraveyard = GraveyardNormal summoned = Normal SummonedFlip summoned = Flip Summonedequip spell card = Equip Cardsum = total MANY' date=' OCG errors. However, I like the pics.[/quote'] my freind spire dont the errersgood cards a desent pics6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ricksta13 Posted December 12, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2008 Thanks for all the comments guys. I would fix the OCG since you mentioned it, but I'm too lazy >.>. I will use those tips for future cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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