Four Arms Magma Demon

[Shocked]

My new card

 

 

[spoiler=Effect]When this card inflicts Battle Damage to opponent's Life Points, this card gain 200 ATK. When this card is attacked in Defense Position, this card gain 200 DEF. when this card is attacked in Attack Position, this card gain 200 ATK and 200 DEF. If this card is destroyed and sent into the Graveyard during your End Phase, you can Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position by paying 100 lifepoint per turn until this card is successfully destroyed.

 

 

I got this pic in google

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[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

Honestly?

Pic needs a background.

Some OCG errors.

Effect is OP'ed

 

And you should switch the ATK and DEF on this card, too.

 

Here is my suggestion for the OCG/Effect

 

Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase the ATK of this card by 200. When your opponent's monster attacks this face-up Defense Position card, increase the DEF of this card by 100. When your opponent's monster attacks this Attack Position card, increase the ATK of this card by 100. During the End Phase of a turn that this card was destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card. If you Special Summon this card this way, you must pay 200 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, this card is destroyed.

 

It's still probably a lil OP'ed, but it's better. I hope you found this helpful.

 

pic: 7/10

OCG: 6/10

Balance: 5/10

overall: 6/10

 

Fix what I showed you and that will easily bump up to an 8 or 9/10

[Sammidysam]

I see some errors, but noahyel pointed them out. 6/10

[Master of Shadows]

No offense, but, bad pic, OP, OCG errors, 1/10

[Professor Cobra]

Change ATK to 1200, pic needs color in the background. Good effect. 7/10

[MohamedH.]

Origonal

not to over powered

Bad OCG

I'd give you a 8/10 if there was a background to the picture.

my rating 7.5/10

[Shocked]

Honestly?

Pic needs a background.

Some OCG errors.

Effect is OP'ed

 

And you should switch the ATK and DEF on this card' date=' too.

 

Here is my suggestion for the OCG/Effect

 

Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points, increase the ATK of this card by 200. When your opponent's monster attacks this face-up Defense Position card, increase the DEF of this card by 100. When your opponent's monster attacks this Attack Position card, increase the ATK of this card by 100. During the End Phase of a turn that this card was destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card. If you Special Summon this card this way, you must pay 200 Life Points during each of your Standby Phases. If you do not, this card is destroyed.

 

It's still probably a lil OP'ed, but it's better. I hope you found this helpful.

 

pic: 7/10

OCG: 6/10

Balance: 5/10

[b']overall:[/b] 6/10

 

Fix what I showed you and that will easily bump up to an 8 or 9/10

 

Thanks, noahyel !

I will repair it

Thanks for all of the comments and rating