unholy Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 ive done like like a hell set of cards lol im like a noob at this so these are my very first cards critizize them as much as necessary :) hope u like em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 1) make more effect cards2) soem pictuers are oversued and need editing3)minor and major OCG errors4)some cards are OP (too high ATK and DEF)#5)some fake type cards (dark god)6)need to capatlize names7) capatilize card txt nice attepmt, if u fix everything, these would be completely awesome!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unholy Posted December 10, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 srry just red that u need permision for the pics sadly i dont have permission so i deleted them:'( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yarabi Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 hey......you're using card pics that was seen in many sets before you made this....Lucifer and dragon warrior of the black......WTF!!!!!!!! cards need to be realistic, not to have 4000,5000 ATK.......nothing special......but good for 5/10.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dire Wolf Posted December 10, 2008 Report Share Posted December 10, 2008 Effects+Description=Bad=Dragon warrior of the blackDont use normal monsters they are bad and show no creativity even though 2 cards have effectsSome OCG errorsOver powerd!Dont use Fake types.capatilize card textneed to capatlize names Some are Way over powerd i mean 500ATK on a 12 level monster.Thats not even Creative that just plain nonsense!Thats not even OMG.I cannot explain how bad that is!Nobody makes 12 start monsters unless its in a set as a fusion finishing act!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LightxKira Posted December 11, 2008 Report Share Posted December 11, 2008 little ocg errors there pics are good but a bit op. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 6.5/10 Good Try! :) :lol: 8) :d :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Molten Meteor Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Test Op'ed... 3/10 No vannila's Please! Ive told at least 5 people today! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Riku~ Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Ok dude... The types you're using don't exist and the cards are massively overpowered. 5/10 you can do better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unholy Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 wtf i deleted this thread!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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