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Densarion

Is it good or no good?  

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  1. 1. Is it good or no good?



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SECRET EFFECTS!!

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned from your hand by tributing one Dark monster, one Light Monster and one other monster of any attribute. This card can only be special summoned from your graveyard by removing from play, from your field or graveyard, one Dark monster, one Light monster and one other monster of any attribute. When this card is special summon from your graveyard, one monster that wasn't used for the summoning of this card. This card gains 1000 ATK for each monster in your graveyard. If you have one Light monster and one Dark Monster on your side of the field aswell as this card, you can pay 1000 lifepoints to destroy all cards on your opponents side of the field.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing 1 DARK monster, 1 LIGHT monster and 1 other monster of any Attribute. This card can only be Special Summoned from your Graveyard by removing from play, from your field or Graveyard, 1 DARK monster, 1 LIGHT monster and one other monster of any Attribute. This card gains 1000 ATK for each monster in your Graveyard. If you have 1 LIGHT monster and 1 DARK monster on your field as well as this card, you can pay 1000 Life Points to destroy all cards on your opponent's field.

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I'm a little unsure how to reword a couple of places, but it's mostly fixed for you. ^_^

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I took this out: "When this card is special summon from your graveyard, one monster that wasn't used for the summoning of this card."

 

^^Mainly because it wasn't a clear effect (to me)

 

Maybe it should have been: "Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard that wasn't used for the Summoning of this card." (2nd part of effect)

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The pic has some wording in it. Might wanna find a way to remove it. Or find another pic.

 

only 1 "?" is needed for ATK and DEF. Not 4.

 

Overall, not too bad. Not Great, but not bad either.

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