.Gideon. Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 A new card , hope 2 see some comments ... rate , comment , fix , thanxIMG from www.epilogue.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxdemonicfuxoffxx Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 take a "S" of the title if u wantocg errorstweak effect about the attribute, its too complicated to do correctlyatk and def can be changed a bit My version: Zedavun, The Head Hunter Earth Attribute Lv. 6 [Warrior/Effect] Each time this monster destroys a monster as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Head Token" (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position on your side of the field. The tokens cannot be Tributed for a Tribute Summon. You can Tribute up to 4 "Head Token" to increase this monster's ATK by 200 for each "Head Token" Tributed until the End Phase of your turn. ATK: 2400 DEF: 1800 8/10 gj overall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 emm your version looks good to me, but the attribute and type must be the same as the destroyed monster (since its that monster's "HEAD" ^^") I know it's complicated to do it correctly but thats the best i came to, like to see more ideas from you thanx 4 your comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xxdemonicfuxoffxx Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 ok then, just that i don't kno how to word itmaybe something like: Special Summon 1 "Head Token" (Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0). The type and attribute of the Summoned "Head Token" is the same Type and Attribute as the monster that was destroyed right before the Summon. but that's very similar to yours, except some capitalization and some rewordingso ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 6.7/10 Good Try Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 destroys = destroy RatingPic : 10/10Effect : 7/10 (I don't understand with that effect)OCG : 9/10Overall : 8.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Thanx all for comment ,, BUMP ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Tribute 1 "Head Token", for the Token stats, leave anything as ?'s, capitalize attribute and type. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Maybe add more abilities to the tokens. Cool pic, even though there's wording on it (lower left corner). 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Ok I see Demented I didnt notice that wordin ! ;padding an effect to the heads may turn it overpowered thnx guyz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 6.5/10nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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