Zeroshot Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 [align=center]Hello. First I want to point something out, my title did not say 'Zeroshot's mega awesome completely amazing splicey bladidy bla' That's because I'm not professional and I don't not consider myself Megaly awesomely completelyly amazingly good at splices. With that, I'm saying that fixes are more helpful than 'Koolio man, 7/10'Second, I fail at all things shading, half the time I don't know what the hell I'm doing. That's where I need the most help.Third, I have over 100 splices. I will only be posting the ones I think are 'good'. Also, keep in mind that my favorite pokemon is Scizor. 3 1/2: I know the title is 'Splices' but I'll be posting Battle Scenes, Trainer sprites, fakemon, and maybe recolors too. Fourth: Finally. [spoiler=Syclone]Scizor + FlygonFlying(Head piece scratched)Made because Flygon and Scizor are my 2 favorite pokemon [spoiler=Teh Big Time]Fakemon (Scratched)Dark/Electric(Based on a clock.... Scizor's main colors. Beedrills main colors)Made because I felt like it. [spoiler=eatre]Alakazam+AmbipomNormal(Based on a compulsive eater. Name combination of Ontre' (sp) and Eat. Various brown areas scratched. Right tail hand edited.)Made for splicer test on PMF [spoiler=Beezor]Scizor+BeedrilllBug(Stripes scratched. [they kinda suck tho]. I believe I heard 'Beezor' mentioned on Harry Potter once? Something about a goat poison) [spoiler=Spider-Pig]Recolored/edited Grumpig.Fighting(The lines look really crowded. I'll try to fix that. Based on Homer's pig. Added by popular demand.) [spoiler=Aero]Crobat+Lairon+AerodactylSteel/Flying('Aero' is my Aerodactyl's nickname in ever pokemon game where I have aquired an Aerodactyl, which is 4. Prototype sprite uses Charizard wings, this was corrected and name shortened from Aerozardd to Aero. I share rights to this sprite with Ruby, as he recolored the Prototype and uses that in his showcase.) [spoiler=Darth Vader]Edited Lance from Fire Red/Leaf Green. Mostly scratched.(Was watching Star Wars: Episode 3 when sprite was created.) [spoiler=Darth Vader's Trainer Card]Trainer: Darth VaderPokemon-Top Row (Left to right): Scrapnel (Fakemon), Darkulti (Darkrai + Gastly + Giratina), Darth Gallade (Edited Gallade)Bottom Row (Left to Right): Fissil (Heatran+Regigigas+Rydon), Unnamed pokemon (Edited Torterra+Lapras), Shadow Lugia (Recolored Lugia)(Background found on Google; Card template found on Serebii.net) [spoiler=Dragonfly]Dragonite+FlygonDragonNothing scratched. Custom-colored stripes.(Was made as a novelty sprite, as it is able to be called Dragonfly with a combination of the 2 names.) [spoiler=Green Day]Grotle+Infernape+Delibird+Latios+GyradosFlying/WaterPartly scratched flame and beard. Custom color palette (Emerald)(Name derived from letters in the name. The G, R and E in Grotle. The E and N in Infernape. The D in Delibird (clever capitalization, eh?). The A in Latios and the Y in Gyrados. All togeter it spells G-R-E-E-N-D-A-Y) [spoiler=Firasaur]Bulbasaur Re-typeFireScratched Volcano/lava streams, eyes edited.(Something that is hard to notice is that inside the mouth, it is supposed to resemble bubbling Magma) [spoiler=Daymin]Shaymin+GastlyGhostCompleteley scratched ghosty stuff.(Name is derived from Daemen which means Demon) [spoiler=Inzard]Fakemon (scratched)FireCompletely scratched, Moltres's flame used as tail (I can't draw fire for sheet)(Name Inferno+Lizard=Inzard. Also, although it's name is suggesting it's a lizard, this pokemon is based on the legendary 6 legged salamander.) [spoiler=Regituf]Registeel + WigglytuffSteelRegisteel's face is scratched.(this is a wip, I've been requested to post more of my /bad/ work. Fixing the awkwardness of the opening.) [spoiler=Yaron]Yanma + AronSteelAron mask scratched, body thingy scratched, Aron feet scratched.(Requested by Raelen) [spoiler=Scizor Revamp]Left=Generation II SpriteRight=Revamped sprite. [spoiler=Zangu]Pikachu+ZangooseNormalNot a lot of scratching in this one. Small edits, but most is just Copypaste.(Possible Pre-evolution of Zangoose?) [spoiler=Ninjadude]Gallade (Platinum) Edit.DarkErased some parts of gallade that stood out too much, like his hips, 'blades' on his arm and his mohawk. Edited head.(He's a ninja) [spoiler=Gliscix]Gliscor + SteelixSteelScratched a mock up of Steelix's tail. Edited face to make it look like a serial killer.(Biggest pain so far.) [spoiler=Neojmenovane]Gengar+IgglybuffEars and feet of Gengar. Mouth scratched.(Meh, filling a request.) [spoiler=Grhyno]Golem+RhydonGolom sphere, Rhydon legs and upper body. Scratched rock-feel(When I said Steel was hard to shade, I was wrong. Rock is extremely wrong. Filled a request) [spoiler=Fang]Scyther+SeviperScther's base, Sevipers color/body type.(Requested sprite, mostly just a recolor with some scratching done.) [spoiler=Unnamed Pokemon Sprite]Gyrados+ClaydolClaydol's natural 'hands', color, eye things(Requested. Meh, not my favorite.) [spoiler=Hauntox]Muk+Spiritomb+HaunterDon't feel like doing the rest of the summary, deal with it. [spoiler=Elebum]Electivire+MagmortarElectivires feet and left arm and things on his head, Magmortars body recolored as Electivire.(I made this because I saw a splice of the same pokemon that was absolutely terrible. Granted, this didn't come out perfect but I like it. Emo haircuts are always fun on pokemon. Name a combination of Elekid and Boobum) [spoiler=Tigrark]Sharpedo+Arcanine/GrowlithAll of the Arcanine/Growlith crap is scratched.(I wanted to experiment with the A/G line shading. I left the eye seperate from the rest of the head because I wanted a little Sharpedo left in. [spoiler=Water-fakemon-deal-thing]100% scratched(I know the shading makes absolutly no sense whatsoever, but I think even with all the defects it still managed to look cool. It's supposed to be a Water/Ghost type based on polluted water) [spoiler=Aggron Inferno'd sheet]Aggron body inferno'd several times with several different colors (all custum). (It's supposed to be animated but I never god around to animating it correctly.) [spoiler=Cryscor]Completely scratchedKRIS-core [spoiler=Region Map] Now taking requests(requests may be ignored and may not be done in order of request time.)(You must post some sort of input on the sprites I have provided if you wish to request.) [spoiler=Request bin]All requested splices that don't meet my standerds will be placed here. Do not grade these as you would an above splice, as these were made for the public. I did do the best of my ability, however. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Ok, these are genious. Spider Pig = win, Teh Big Time = more win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Wow. That time guy kicks butt. Points for spider pig. Your a great splicer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Wow. That time guy kicks butt. Points for spider pig. Your a great splicer. Thanks. I have a really big problem with Big Time's left half of his body so he's still in development.I'll update more tomorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Change to 'Zeroshot's mega awesome completely amazing splicey bladidy bla' nao. Syclone rocks and Spider Pig is win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Spider Pig, Spider Pig, Does Whatever A Spider Pig Does. Can He Swing, From A Web, No He Can't, He's A Pokemon! Look Out, It's Zero-Shot's Awesome Splices! Epic/Epic-1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flavour Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Wow,these are amazing.Spider Pig is awesome,and I find it hard to believe that you did Teh Big Time from scratch.You might want to take away the grey perts from Eatre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Wow' date='these are amazing.Spider Pig is awesome,and I find it hard to believe that you did Teh Big Time from scratch.You might want to take away the grey perts from Eatre.[/quote'] I did do Teh Big Time completely from scratch. 5 days of drawing, erasing, re-drawing, coloring and shading. Well first, my little brother made it very clear when he named it 'eatre' that the first 'e' is not capitalized. Second, I did have the version without the cloth in his hand at one time, but it was lost in a terrible eraser-related accedent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marisa Kirisame-ze Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Amazing, your possibly the best splicest I know. The Crimson One,Miranda-chan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Nice splices! Your Beezor looks a bit too busy with the stripes. Maybe cut down on the black stripes.On the Syclone, you need to fix the shape and the shading of the head. It looks different than the rest of the splice because it looks more 2D than the rest. Shading would fix that. (I know it's got some, just needs more.)Spiderpig: All I can say is Lol. ^_^Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Spider Pig=Win. You could splice every single pokemon in the world and make something... 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 These are all really good.The only big problem is that there is a random floating pixel near Beezor's right leg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Those are great dude1!"(#)!/#%#"£@$£@@£ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Beezor with no pixel added.Syclone more advanced shading added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The new ones are great! Dragonfly is awesome and well recolored :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Beezor with no pixel added.Syclone more advanced shading added. Yay! Great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Flygon+Scizor is a little mixed and matched. The three different types of green really throw it off. The wings seem out of place, specially teh way they are colored. The claws look weirdly disintatched fromthe rest of the body due to different shading. The tail is connected pretty bad also. As far as the shading go, and important rule to know about is light source. Shading is dicided by how light would hit your object. Normally the light of a Pokemon sprite comes from the top left corner. Your shading does seem random, and you just took what other sprites do for shading. That shows the basics of shading for the most part, but on the example of a sphere. It shows though how where the light shines directly, it's brightest, and where things block light, shadows are created. I'm not an expert on shading or anything, I'm not that great at spriting myself. Look at other's sprites, like Pokemon sprites, to figure how things are shaded. Aerocactyl+Crobat+Aggron has some border issues. near the neck and a few other areas you have unrecolored borders. I don't like how you shaded the eye black, it's hard to notice and looks like one of the blotches that are on the rest of the head. The head also looks too metallic compared to the stone look the jaw and other parts have. Flygon+Dragonite has eyes that look so weird, because of the red. A little red pixel is also on the antennae. The wings look off also, like Flygon wings often do, it's something about those wings that don't work. Vader is neet, but the first problem I had was the lightsaber. It gets oddly thick near the end, it isn't very straight, the hilt looks weird, and it's coming out on a weird angle that doesn't look right with the angle of the arm and hand. The helmet also I find odd, it's weirdly large and there is that random light splotch on it. I get how there should be a highlight there, but that one is too bright compared tot he rest of it. Also, more shades could be better, only have about the three you have doesn't look too great. Ok, for the Fakemon. The lightsource on it is in multiple different spots. The body suggests to the left. The spear, the top left. The right arm, the right. The right hand, bottom right. So over all, too many different locations of light. The shading in general on the face seems all over the place with little reasoning. Depending on the material of the face though, I'd imagine it to be more smooth and round, versus the way you have it very splotchy. Borders need some work too. For example on the face, the left side the dark gray is very thick. Also there is that black border, which I assume is the normal body, in that case it should be that dark red color. You also didn't quite do rounded things right. Here is a chart I've used to show what I mean by that. On the left side of that is a oval not done right, while on the right side is one that is done right. One the hand, it doesn't fully wrap around the spear. The feat look very awkward too in shape, I don't get why they are point like that either. On the right arm, you don't have the same metal band as the left one. The spear in general I don't like, just because I don't get why it is there. Some Pokemon do have weapons, like Farfetch'd, but that's its entire theme. Your guy though seems to have the theme that he is a living clock, giving him the spear just adds more themes to him, too many can make a Pokemon cluttered and takes away from some of them. I understand though that is a clock hand though, and it isn't too bad of an addition, and it won't make the Fakemon 'bad', just as I said, cluttered. I also don't see how it is a dark/electric. I could see it being Normal, or even Normal electric, but the dark doesn't seem to fit in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skyfi Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 The first one and Spider pig are epic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Jappio, thanks for the advice; something I find embarassing is that some things you said looked bad or weird, I did on purpose. To answer a few of your questions, 1: Dark/ Electric.Big Time is based off of a clock, clocks run on electricity.It's Dark trait come mostly from the eyes and mustache. To tell you the truth, it is based off of a 50-70s TV villain (name unkown). The eyes look sinister and the villain is commonly looping his mustache. 2: The spearI added the spear because that is one of the basic means of drawing I know. The truth is, I couldn't make the hand curl around into a fist perfectly, so I added somthing over it. 3: VaderThank you, I've never heard you ever call any of my work 'neet'The lightsaber is supposed to look like it's coming out, it didn't work. 4: The dragonite.I'll try to scratch the wings or explore other Flygon sprites. I don't like the eyes much either, I'll change it. One pixel......wow.... I didn't see it at all actually, thanks for noticing it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Well the term neat I don't use too often, because normally I try not too. When critiquing I try avoid ego building, unless I really like something, or if I forget to take that out of the post. To be honest, I found your fakemon more neat than Vader. So just because I'm very critical and negative in my critiques, that's because I avoid complements. Normally everyone else is too busy giving complements in their responses, so I try to keep with just the negative stuff to try and balance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 lol, I like the way you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Nice. Very nice, indeed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chowderbalboa Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 AWESOME!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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