Ocherus Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 This is my first ever card. Please tell me what you think. I know, my OCG is absolutely horrible, but tell me how to fix it please. And also, unfortunately, I cant give exact image credit because I found the picture on Google a while back while looking for a picture of a Phoenix. I did the lame holo myself in PS. Hopefully its not overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Not bad some OCG errors, but still goofmonster=Monsterresult of battle=by battleyour side of the field=your fieldLittle well balanced8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ocherus Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Thank you. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 As long as this card remains face-up on the Field, increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters other than this card on your side of the field by 500. good card , I think it's not so Overpowered.8/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 OCG errors: -1Blurry Pic: -.5 7.5. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 If you control 2 or more FIRE monsters, this card's ATK is increased by 500. If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. There you go. Great card! I am having a hard time believing this is your first card, it is that good! No, really! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 I'd say it goes like this: "All FIRE monsters you control gain 500 ATK (except this card). If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent." And yeah, it's a little overpowered due to its high ATK and with no cons in the effect and only pros, I'd lower its ATK to around 2600. Very good for first card. Also, make the Set ID prefix 4 characters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Oh, I read it wrong, but Dark Edo, I'm pretty sure the opponent of the owner of this card will not be very scared about taking daage. Increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters by 500 (except this card). If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 lol you're right, meant daage to be damage, typo lol *fixed*. Still, increase isn't used anymore, gain is used in today's OCG. =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 I think " As long as this card is on the field while there is two or more FIRE monsters, all FIRE monsters gain 500 ATK. If this card is destroyed by battle your opponent loses 500 Life Points." But that is just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all FIRE monsters gain 500 (except this card). If this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Change to increase the ATK of all FIRE monsters (except this card) by 500 until the end of your next turn. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ocherus Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Thanks everyone. I'm really old school when it comes to Yu-Gi-Oh because I quit playing and collecting a few years ago. And to the blurry pic comment, Im pretty sure thats just because its digitally painted very softly, not actually blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Quatrario Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Even i didn't do this well on my 1st try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Not bad some OCG errors' date=' but still good as a result of battle=by battleyour side of the field=your fieldLittle well balanced[/quote'] Fixed.________________________________________ Good for a first card. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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