Ocherus Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 All image credit in Circulation. These are two boring, plain monsters, that fuse to make a pretty cool one. Im not sure about OCG. And I know, the watermark in the Dragon looks a bit wierd, but the artist has it there for a reason, of course. I'm also not sure if I did the " + " thing in the Fusion card right. Help is appreciated. These are my 2nd, 3rd, and 4th cards. Tell me what you think. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 its not good its ok 6.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ocherus Posted December 13, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Ok. Any reasons why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiko-San Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 hm... vanilla cards... i think all in all7.3/10 its okay but it could be better the pic of the fusion is nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 every = each Graveyard during your End Phase, you lose 500 Life Points________________________________________________ Try giving the Fusion Material Monsters effects. Normals aren't really welcome here. :neutral: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Raise=IncreaseEnd Turn=End PhaseDemented covered the rest. The ocg needs some work. Try reading the ocg rules thread. We don't like normals here, there just boring. I like the descriptions for the normal monsters. Pics are very cool. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ocherus Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Yea I only made the normals just because they were in the fusion. Thanks everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Interesting to see Normal Monsters in the mix, however, the Fusion Monster doesn't look to fare so well... Rating: Image: 7.5/10 (Simply put...I see a watermark on "Prisoner Dragon"... It puts a large dent on the score.) Effect: 7.5/10 (Lovely...an ATK gain effect... While that is okay, the limiter is not... Cards like "Dark Paladin" have an overpowered ATK gain and no limiters to its presence. Perhaps you should give reference to its Normal Monster brethren instead.)---Choice For Normal Monsters: (Hm...without so much as a visable supporter card for these monsters, their presence wouldn't be welcome indeed. Either give them the support they so desperately need or maybe at least give an effect to the weakest link... I'm not going to comment on "blandness" of Normal Monsters, but sometimes without suitable support, they won't hold their own for so long.) Grammar: 8.5/10 (This has been touched on alot, so it would seem like a repeat. Here is what the effect should be displayed... "This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Warrior-Type Monster in your opponent's Graveyard. If you control this face-up during your End Phase, you lose 500 Life Points.") Overall: 7.5/10 (It is nice to see Fusion-Material Monsters and a Fusion Monster, but the execution didn't go so well. Maybe "Corrupted Manhunter" will turn out to be a killer should he turn out to be revised.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I like them 8/10 few OCG errors but they pretty much covered it ^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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