lala7777 Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 I have started to make a rpg game called spirit caller its about a spirit caller named blade and his friend kia the games set in a fantasy world called zenos where there was a spirit war that was started by an organization called the dark knights who turned spirits insane only wanting to kill all humans the dark knights are not human so the spirits just ignore them the dark knights almost took full control over zenos but the guardians of the humans the demons came and helped the humans desfet the dark knights after destroying the dark matter generator which is the souce of the corruption the spirits went back to normal in a few days and the dark knights just vanished but now it is happening again and the only ones who can stop it are blade and kia but now even the demons are corrupt blade and kias only hope to end the second spirit war and defeat the dark knights is to reawaken the ancient spirits that are in suspended animation units called spirit crystals I will probable have a demo of the game for download soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skuldur Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 Paragraph makes no sense Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Umbra Posted December 13, 2008 Report Share Posted December 13, 2008 THATis paragraphed better than this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 THATis paragraphed better than this.that cleared it up for me,you are saying that some guy built a brick house but accidentally trapped a spirit inside and now he must free it with the demolition crew that requests spirit crystals as payment so he decides to work for his next door neighbor by mowing his lawn to earn enough money to buy a gun to rob a bank to get more money to rob the gun store and sell the guns for enough money to buy a gun so he can rob a bank and use the money to buy better guns to rob a gun store and sell the guns to earn enough money to buy a better gun to rob a bank to earn money to buy a new gun so he can rob a gun store and sell the guns for money to buy a better gun so he can rob a bank and use the money to buy a better gun so he can rob a gun store and sell the guns for money so he can buy a better gun so he can rob a bank and get the money to buy a better gun to rob a gun store and sell the guns for money so he can buy a better gun to rob a bank and use the money to buy a better gun so he could rob a gun store and sell the gun and rob the bank so he can get sent to jail where a hidden spirit crystal was hidden and now he needs a way to break out so he decides to work for his next door neighbor by mowing his lawn to earn enough money to buy a gun to rob a bank to get more money to rob the gun store and sell the guns for enough money to buy a gun so he can rob a bank and use the money to buy better guns to rob a gun store and sell the guns to earn enough money to buy a better gun to rob a bank to earn money to buy a new gun so he can rob a gun store and sell the guns for money to buy a better gun so he can rob a bank and use the money to buy a better gun so he can rob a gun store and sell the guns for money so he can buy a better gun so he can rob a bank and get the money to buy a better gun to rob a gun store and sell the guns for money so he can buy a better gun to rob a bank and use the money to buy a better gun so he could rob a gun store and sell the gun for a better gun and break out of jail then pay the demolition crew to free the spirit and now he is homeless and has a criminal record.that doesn't seem interesting at allorganize paragraphs better please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Words....too much WORDSI only know there's a demo for testing soon... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raenii Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 NO FULL STOPS?! FAIL!!!!11!!111!!!!!ELEVEN!1!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I have started to make a RPG game called 'Spirit Caller'. It's about a spirit caller named Blade and his friend Kia. The game is set in a fantasy world called Zenos where there was a Spirit War. The war was started by an organization called The Dark Knights who turned spirits insane only wanting to kill all humans. The Dark Knights are not human so the spirits just ignore them. The Dark Knights almost took full control over Zenos but the Guardians of the humans' date=' the demons, came and helped the humans defeat the dark knights after destroying the dark matter generator which is the souce of the corruption the spirits. It soon went back to normal in a few days and the dark knights just vanished but now it is happening again and the only ones who can stop it are Blade and Kia. But now even the demons are corrupt. Blade and Kia are the only hope to end the second spirit war and defeat the dark knights is to reawaken the ancient spirits that are in suspended animation units called spirit crystals I will probable have a demo of the game for download soon[/quote']Grammar corrected, read now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
moneypony Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I have started to make a RPG game called 'Spirit Caller'. It's about a spirit caller named Blade and his friend Kia. The game is set in a fantasy world called Zenos where there was a Spirit War. The war was started by an organization called The Dark Knights who turned spirits insane only wanting to kill all humans. The Dark Knights are not human so the spirits just ignore them. The Dark Knights almost took full control over Zenos but the Guardians of the humans' date=' the demons, came and helped the humans defeat the dark knights after destroying the dark matter generator which is the souce of the corruption the spirits. It soon went back to normal in a few days and the dark knights just vanished but now it is happening again and the only ones who can stop it are Blade and Kia. But now even the demons are corrupt. Blade and Kia are the only hope to end the second spirit war and defeat the dark knights is to reawaken the ancient spirits that are in suspended animation units called spirit crystals I will probable have a demo of the game for download soon[/quote']Grammar corrected, read now.thanks for the fix,seems interesting and all,mind telling us an estimate of when it will come out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 sorry for the unreadable paragraph I was in a hurry I dont really have an idea when the demo will come out because I just started the game but I have made a test version of spirit caller which is just an outline of the story line and game play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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