Towa Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Hi guys this is the first card I made with the Card Maker. So I hope you like it or give me some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Fix: When this card attacks your opponent directly, decrease this card's ATK by 500 until the End Phase.____________________________________________________________________ Meh-ish pic. Maybe add to the effect a bit. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fog38 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The negative effect really isn't enough to make a level 4 monster balanced. Pic is good and the only Official Card Grammar effor I see is what DeMeNTeD pointed out. 5/10 keep working on it and it will get better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 overpowered for a lvl 4 monster.maybe making the effect : each time this card attacks you opponent directly, decrease this card's ATK by 500. : will make it balanced Grammer fixed by Demented 6/10good 4 the first time keep workin on it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 6.3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Towa Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Thx for the feedback. I think your right the card is overpowered so I use the idea of DeViLQ8 and change the effekt of the card. Because of the picture. I am not that pro in graphic programs. I have the Paint Shop Pro 7 and I try a little transparency with it but its doesnt works so well. Is there any way I can change the title of the thread because I think I should post all my cards I made in this thread instead of making a new one for every card. If a moderator can change the name then change it please to something like "Towas Cards" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeT Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I think the pic of the card and idea of the card was gud but i suggest raisin its level to about 7 stars and saying that if this card attacks your opponent directly decrease its attack by half an attack again or increase its atk by 500 and attack again. Your choice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I thought it was desent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeT Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 sorry but i had to suggest one more effect that you could make perfect with this card while keeping it at 4 stars: when this card inflicts battle damage to your opponents lp you lose damage equal to half the damage inflected. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Read what DeMeNtEd wrote. Damn, OCG sucks. Bad card. It's spelt Volcano Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 OCG needs work. The pic is pretty decent. Nice play on words [i think Vulcano is one]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeT Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 oh?! my bad i didnt see that u changed the card before mi first comment. U can forget what i said now if u want but take the effect into consideration and i know itll help u out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 good now I can give it a 8/10balanced enough , just work on the image and for you " RAHIM HONEST " I think u should take a negative rep for that comment , the guy is still new to this and you can be nice and help him : ) good job dude dunt bother those guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The card is good, but i think the effect would be proding people to not use it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Towa Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Ok thanks again for the feedback but I am a little confused now is Vulcano right or Volcano? The card is good, but i think the effect would be proding people to not use it. Hm a good point but I think that this card is more balanced than for example the Chainsaw Insect card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earthbound411 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I like it. 9.5/10 Either bump it up one level or lower the attack. Extra props for the custom art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 good now I can give it a 8/10balanced enough ' date=' just work on the image and for you " RAHIM HONEST " I think u should take a negative rep for that comment , the guy is still new to this and you can be nice and help him : ) good job dude dunt bother those guys[/quote']You are still new. That card doesn't deserve 8/10. I am not being rude, I stated what was bad about it.6/10 at the most. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Towa Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 You are still new. That card doesn't deserve 8/10. I am not being rude, I stated what was bad about it.6/10 at the most. Well the only thing you stated was that the card sucks and that OCG sucks.That is very helpful for me -.- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 When this card attacks your opponent's Life Points directly, okay pic and effect. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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