dml Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Check it out! (I got my pic from Google.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 "Increase your Life Points by 1000 for every FIRE monster in your Graveyard." I think thats better. Basic, and slightly overpowering effect, but good try ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 As stated above. Try lowering ATK and DEF to 3000 and 2000 respectively. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dml Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Ok I changed it! Thanks for the constructive criticism! I'm new so thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Should take a look at Yankeefan's post and change the effect's OCG to that. And while you're doing it you could add on to it's effect. Creative effects are a huge bonus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dml Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Ok! Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 "Increase your Life Points by 1000 for each FIRE monster in your Graveyard." Fixed. It's each, not every ;)______________________________________________ I agree with it being a bit overpowered. Maybe add a certain condition to the effect. Probably add more effects, regardless. It looks simple. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 7.4/10 Good Try! :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Well your OCG has already been fized, so all I say is, it should be a Dragon not a Beast. And the effect is too simple. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolsnub Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Lol how to post i New Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dml Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 How about that? I updated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 overpowered thats my only word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nɇvɇrmorɇ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 AWSOME 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Diviner Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Not good. And that's being nice. Work on it and then you'll improve. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luna Lovegood Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 OCG needs work. Picture is overused. I would have on in a extra deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Better. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Pay 1000 Life Points to look at the top 5 cards of your opponent's Deck. Discard all FIRE monsters. Good pic, change Level to 7, good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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