Newest Card - Need Feedback!

[Spire]

Alright heres my Latest card:

 

[spoiler=[size=x-small]Dragon of Boundless Demise[/size]]

 

[spoiler=[size=x-small]Card Lore[/size]]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 2 Level 4 or higher monsters you control. When this card is selected as an attack target, decrease the ATK of this card by 1200 to place 1 Demise Counter on the attacking monster and negate the attack. During your opponent's Standby Phase, if your opponent has a monster with a Demise Counter, your opponent must select 1 other monster on his/her field and send it to the Graveyard. If your opponent cannot, destroy the monster with a Demise Counter and place it at the bottom of your opponent's Deck. During the End Phase, if this card has less then 1500 ATK, destroy it and inflict damage to your Life Points equal to half the DEF of this card.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[spoiler=[size=x-small]Image Credit[/size]]

http://www.dragonlance.com/downloads/darkqueen800.jpg

Image from here, and I do not claim this image as my own.

 

 

 

 

It's not my best card, and that is the point, I need help with it. I'd really appreciate some help with this card, thanks.

[Flavour]

It's nice,I love the holo.The name might need work,but the effect is good.Maybe you should change it so you lower it's ATK by 1000 every time it's attacked.But thats just my opinion...

9/10.

[Spire]

I would, but I think that would be overpowered, as you can use it's effect 3 times that way, and you could keep destoying your opponent's monsters. I did do that originally but changed my mind. And the name? It's not the best of names, however it goes well with the effect. As it's "Boundless" Demise and the fact that you can keep forcing your opponent to destroy their own monsters. And death is demise. Which is why I think it goes well.

[Snitch]

Wow, I love this card. No OCG errors to be seen, I love the effect, the holo is really good and such. Did you do the holo yourself? If so, can you PM me on how to do bg holos? =/

[Flavour]

Ok,I see now.

[Fog38]

I'm trying so hard to find some ocg errors but there aren't any. One of these time you should put on in just to see if anyone fines it. As for the card, it is extremity powerful, but is also very balanced, and cost a hefty price. Pic is good and name is okay.

9.6/10

[JG.]

There is 1 OCG error I think:

 

reduce = decrease

 

I may be wrong though. The card itself is very very good though, only 1 possiblr OCG error.

[Spire]

Damn, your right. I made a noobish error. Thanks for that! ^_^

 

EDIT:

 

*Fixed.

[Flexh]

Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!

 

10/10 without a shadow of a doubt

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

one = 1

 

their = his/her

 

side of the field = field

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I'd lower the DEF to 2500 (that's just me)

 

8/10

[Spire]

^ Error fixed. DEF lowered.

 

But it's the balance i'm really unsure about.

[Shiranui]

I don't know...it's pretty balanced to me. But that's my humble opinion.

9.7/10

[Skyfi]

Wow this card is really original :) The pic and holo effect is phenomenal :)

[Professor Cobra]

Change his/her to their, good pic, change 1200 to 500, take out the last 2 effects. 8/10

[Spire]

Wouldn't that make it overpowered?

[Wuu.]

I never saw you making cards, but this is a beauty!

 

And if it where real i would kill to obtain that card!

 

Nothing overpowered, few grammar problems which i cannot refer you to,

 

this is one killer card! 10/10

[Kotaro]

if only that card was in the shops. Great card, 9/10