-DG- Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Well, I got bored ^_- GOOD, CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM ONLY. SERIOUSLY, I WANT C+C.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Same problem as before. Too much empty space, narrow it down abit. So that there isn't so much emptiness in the sig. Also, the focal should never be attempted to be in the middle, try to cut off like a 3rd of the sig off the left side and about 2 centimeters off the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 so, is that about it? What focal?? You got me there. Explain that part plz ^_^ I understand everything else ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 The focal should be the face and body of the render. Everything else except for the next should be blurred with a guassian blur of about Y: 2 and X: 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 hmm.. I'll try this ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goldman Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 his right to much empty space i like it though 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 You really like that card eh? I see it everywhere on alot of stuff you make. The sig itself is prettt good, I like the way there is an effect by the arms. But as usual too much emptyness. Fix it and you're good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Work on the depth and lighting. You lighting looks off place. Also I hate the c4d. Please don't use that one anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hioco Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Lacks depth. And colours are very bad >. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 If I guess exactly what you did, I iz good? You opened an ultra big canvas.Some kind of gradient smudged.Vector brush brushing.Render.C4D render. Erase of some C4D that covers the focal.Text. anyway, lets get to good CnC: Size it down, it's to big.Erase more of the C4D that covers the render.Get some real brushes, NAO! Those vectors are not for this one.....I like the text, but make it bigger.And, well yeah, that's all from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 his right to much empty space i like it though 8/10 No' date=' there is a little empty space on the left. The right has a few c4d fragments and brushing. Work on the depth and lighting. You lighting looks off place. Also I hate the c4d. Please don't use that one anymore. Is this your tag? I think not. So Dark can use whatever c4d she wants. The c4d actually helps this tag a bit. Unlike many others who place a c4d in the tag because they think it makes their tag good. If I guess exactly what you did' date=' I iz good? You opened an ultra big canvas.Some kind of gradient smudged.Vector brush brushing.Render.C4D render. Erase of some C4D that covers the focal.Text. anyway, lets get to good CnC: Size it down, it's to big.Erase more of the C4D that covers the render.Get some real brushes, NAO! Those vectors are not for this one.....I like the text, but make it bigger.And, well yeah, that's all from me[/quote'] Don't try to guess what people do in a tag. It's noobish. Sometimes, it's even disgraceful. It's not too big. The width could be sized down a bit, but other than that, there is nothing big about it. Real brushes? Want to emphasize what your take on a "Real brush" is? By the way, this tag destroys yours, so I wouldn't talk. Anyways. It's good, from what I can see. -Blending is very good, IMO. Never see good blending nowadays. -Flow is meh. It's very hard to see any, as it seems very scattered and random, but I see some.-Depth is bad. Work on this. (Depth is hard for me as well, so you aren't alone)-Lighting is nice. I like how you use the c4d to make the lighting at parts.-I don't like the text. Try to hold off on it.-There is much empty space on the left side. cut that part off and it would help.-Meti said alot. Thankfully, he and I share the same opinions on the focal.-As Hioco pointed out, colors are bad. (Another problem I have. Don't worry) Keep at it. This is alot better than most of the recent stuff going around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 thnx ^_^ All of you. As for godpuppy, totally wrong on what I did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Distubed I'm taking about the circle c4d.It looks more like a fractal type sig for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Lining Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 It's good, I just can't read the text in the top left corner... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 It says my username >.> It's clear and visible @_@ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Distubed I'm taking about the circle c4d.It looks more like a fractal type sig for me. Disturbed sees no circle c4ds. He knows his eyes are working perfectly and politely asks you to go get yours checked. ^.^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 he's talking about teh "Disk" c4d's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prada Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 he's talking about teh "Disk" c4d's. I see. Proper terms could still be used. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D-Striker Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Does it say "DARH ROSE"? The pic is soo small compared to the size of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miazo Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Does it say "DARH ROSE"? The pic is soo small compared to the size of it.Yet Distburbed is telling me to get my eyes checked? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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