MY NEW EXODIA CARDS PLEASE RATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Nighthawk14]

[Cowboy Dan]

Nice, 7/10

I don't really like the pic for Exodia Return though.

[jabberwock]

good ideas but refine some of the effects they can get confusing

>.<

7/10

[Blitzkrieg98]

Agh! Exodia! AHHHH!!! How many times have I (among others) received the ass-end of an ass kicking PWNAGE when just starting out in the second half of "7 Trials to Glory"? Personal qualms out of the way... Nice to see Exodia-based cards being used...but problems do present themselves...

 

Let's see here...:

 

Grammar: 6.5/10 (A literal mess of grammar... Hmm... Now take note that I'm not the best at pointing out the flaws in multi-card release threads, but I'll see what I can do. In general, "LP" should be "Life Points" at the fullest. Punctuation in certain areas aren't at all evident. I have taken the liberty of putting reworked versions of the card grammar below.)

---"Exoder, the Servant": "You can remove 3 cards you control from play to gain 1000 Life Points. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, draw 2 cards. You cannot declare an attack during your next turn."

---"Exodia Return" (just to be clear...you weren't exact with this card's effect, so I shall help you on that department): "Apply 1 of the following effects: *Select 2 "Forbidden One" cards in your Deck and send them to your Graveyard. *Select 2 "Forbidden One" cards in your Graveyard and add them to your Deck. Draw 1 card.

---"Exodia's Beast": "When this card inflicts Battle Damage, you can pay 1500 Life Points to draw 2 cards. Gain 300 Life Points each time you draw a card(s) by a card(s) effect(s)."

---"Ancient Exodia Text" (Once again, you weren't clear with this one too!): "Activate only by paying 2000 Life Points when a "Forbidden One" card you control is destroyed. Add 1 "Forbidden One" card from your Graveyard to your Deck and draw 1 card."

 

Power and Limit: 6.5 (Overall...I don't feel...comfortable with noting the abundance in power when it comes to these cards; I feel just as equally with the limits given... "Exodia's Beast" makes it so you have to pay an outrageous 1500 Life Points to draw 2, count 'em 2 cards! Of course the effect is dampened because afterwards you gain 300 Life Points for drawing a card(s) by a card effect, namely "Exodia's Beast". I would suggest an 800 Life Point cost and omitting "Exodia's Beast's" effect from giving you any benefit by its OWN effect. When I look at "Exoder, the Servant", I twitch in agony... The limiter to "Exoder, the Servant" is downright unfair, making it so you cannot declare an attack with ANY monster should you succeed with attacking with such a weak monster and once again getting 2 cards! For "Ancient Exodia Text", how about making it so you simply return the "Forbidden One" card(s) that were untimely DISCARDED from your hand back to your hand.)

 

Overall: 6.5 Upsetting... (Do not worry, the potential is all right there, so don't lose sight of salvation yet. Take my advice and the advice of other posts to better the effects and impact of your cards.)

[max the ax]

That's a picture of chaor from chaotic! 4.5/10

[Death Bishop]

3.9/10....

[JMcool234]

9/10. they are preety good

[OMGAKITTY]

See OCG thread.

First pic is exodia inverted.

Second pic is the 5 exodia cards assembled in MS Paint.

I suggest you get better pics for both.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Battle Damage

 

Graveyard

 

Deck

 

Draw Phase

 

LP = Life Points

 

includes "Exodia" in it's card name

[Master of Shadows]

2/12

[Jace Beleren]

4/10

[Spire]

OCG errors:

 

Deck

Graveyard

 

I don't like inverted pics, so the pics could be of improvment.

[wjohc]

your cards are pretty good ideas, but just touch up on the visuals although i like them 6.5/10

[Flexh]

Nice' date=' 7/10

I don't really like the pic for Exodia Return though.

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Same here

but couldn't the 1st one be "frost exodia"cause it's a watery blue colour?

 

 

7/10

[Shadowbreath]

nice although the wording is off