Keos, Legendary Wolf Spirit

[Chief Cotton]

 

Thanks to Blitzkrieg98 for the constructive feedback (:

 

(Old Version: http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/492/keosno5.jpg )

[Blitzkrieg98]

Nice to see another wolf in card form.

 

But anyway:

 

Grammar: 9.5/10 (Impressive grammar. The only exceptions is the use of "Stars", which isn't used in the card game. Perhaps this may help, "You can Tribute 1 Level 4 or higher monster you control to negate the activation and effect of a Trap Card or Effect Monster that...". I am impressed by the use of proper capitalization and close-to-exemplary grammar.)

 

Artwork: (This will have no impact on your score. I'm just glad to see certain card images taken online WITHOUT any texts or watermarks on it.)

 

Power: 9.0/10 (Hmm... Just one thing that bothers me is the overall power of the monster. The ATK is notably high for an effect monster with little-to-no limits to its power. You can either lower the ATK to 2800 or add a summoning condition, such as "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by [insert condition here]." Also, the effect is notably overpowered, as Level 4 monsters are the most commonly used monster in the entirety of the Yu-Gi-Oh! Official Card Game and Trading Card Games, but then again, that all depends on how many Level 4 monsters you can bring onto the field.)

 

Overall: 9.5 Outstanding! (Nicely done single card, FJC. Whether or not you chose to take my advice or not is sincerely up to you. Either way, this still is a good card I am looking at.

[Shiranui]

As stated above. Really bothers me that you can get 2900 ATK with only 2 tributes which i've found is really easy if you have say 3 giant germs in your deck.

[Professor Cobra]

Change to 1 Level 4 or higher monster, raise Level to 8, good pic, good effect. 8/10

[Chief Cotton]

Nice to see another wolf in card form.

 

But anyway:

 

Grammar: 9.5/10 (Impressive grammar. The only exceptions is the use of "Stars"' date=' which isn't used in the card game. Perhaps this may help, "You can Tribute 1 Level 4 or higher monster you control to negate the activation and effect of a Trap Card or Effect Monster that...". I am impressed by the use of proper capitalization and close-to-exemplary grammar.)

 

Artwork: (This will have no impact on your score. I'm just glad to see certain card images taken online WITHOUT any texts or watermarks on it.)

 

Power: 9.0/10 (Hmm... Just one thing that bothers me is the overall power of the monster. The ATK is notably high for an effect monster with little-to-no limits to its power. You can either lower the ATK to 2800 or add a summoning condition, such as "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by [insert condition here']." Also, the effect is notably overpowered, as Level 4 monsters are the most commonly used monster in the entirety of the Yu-Gi-Oh! Official Card Game and Trading Card Games, but then again, that all depends on how many Level 4 monsters you can bring onto the field.)

 

Overall: 9.5 Outstanding! (Nicely done single card, FJC. Whether or not you chose to take my advice or not is sincerely up to you. Either way, this still is a good card I am looking at.

 

Very appreciated.

[Blitzkrieg98]

:) Nice to see I helped out a bit. The ATK may be a little lower, but it balances with a nice effect that can protect itself or even other powerful monsters should you chose to Tribute "Keos, Legendary Wolf Spirit" itself. With this comes the possibility of Special Summoning it back from the Graveyard for another round.

 

Thank you for taking my advice to mind.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Effect may be a little common, but aside from that, nice job.

 

9/10

[xxdemonicfuxoffxx]

no ocg errors

contrary to the others, i find 2800 ATK not oped

gj

9/10

[Chief Cotton]

no ocg errors

contrary to the others' date=' i find 2800 ATK not oped

gj

9/10

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Thanks, I don't know why they say it's overpowered with 2800 ATK/1500 DEF with 8 stars, acknowledging the fact that Blue Eyes has 3000 ATK/2500 DEF with 8 stars or Shinato with 3300 ATK/3000 DEF and 8 stars.

[Shiranui]

To adress that issue, they don't have any effects which can save them. Still...this is ver much balanced to me.

[xxdemonicfuxoffxx]

thats true, but how bout super conductor tyranno? i mean, its got an effect, not quite a good 1, but 3300 atk? tell me about it

this is getting offtopic so ill stop

[Chief Cotton]

Hopefully it's not against the rules to gravedig this baby (my first card if I'm not mistaken). Just curious if you guys think this card is still up to par with today's rules and all.

[drcrisis]

I like it a lot! Very good. But, to be honest, I think it would just be faster to get Stardust imo. Raise the effect, lower the power. Otherwise 8/10 nice.

[Alpakha]

Hopefully it's not against the rules to gravedig this baby (my first card if I'm not mistaken). Just curious if you guys think this card is still up to par with today's rules and all.

 

You necro bumped by 4 years..... There are exceptions to the necrobumping rule, but 4 frikin years. You shoulda just made a new topic.

[Chief Cotton]

You necro bumped by 4 years..... There are exceptions to the necrobumping rule, but 4 frikin years. You shoulda just made a new topic.

I didn't know a number somewhere in the thread could bother someone that much. Sorry ma'am.

[Alpakha]

Sorry ma'am.

 

..... First off, I'm a guy. Secondly, don't worry about me; worry about the mods who might see this.

[Chief Cotton]

..... First off, I'm a guy. Secondly, don't worry about me; worry about the mods who might see this.

Unfortunately for me. Then again I still don't understand why that date could have any significant impact on the post. The numbered day associated with a fictional Yu-Gi-Oh card shouldn't bare upon it an expiration date...

 

Oh, and I was aware of your gender when making that first reply, ma'am.