Hexanort Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Here's my newest card please give rate, comment, correction (especially for OCG). anyway here it is [spoiler=card lore] This card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Special Summoned by Releasing 1 LIGHT monster you control. If this card is Special Summoned you cannot Normal Summon any monster until your next Main Phase. If this card battle a Defense Position monster whose DEF is 2000 or less, destroy the monster without applying damage calculation.Each time this card destroy a DARK monster by battle, increase this card ATK by 100.If this card is destroyed and sent to Graveyard, Draw 2 card from your Deck.If your have 3 "Axewielder Paladin" in your Graveyard, you can remove from play 2 "Axewielder Paladin" in your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Axewielder Paladin" from your Graveyard to your field in Attack Position. Pic credit:http://th05.deviantart.com/fs18/300W/i/2007/217/d/2/Paladin_by_RalphHorsley.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Chaos Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 destory needs to be destories. and that fixes everything 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 You know nothing about OCG (I'm talking to LoC). Your OCG is ok, there are a few places where you forgot to space after a period. But the first destroy needs to be destroys (correct spelling this time), and the 3 "Axweilder Paladin"s I have just fixed. Otherwise great card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kryuzei Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 This card can draw card, can revive, easy summoning (btw, what would happen if I summon a LIGHT monster first and then summon this card at the same turn ?) . . But I wonder why I didn't think that this card is overpowering ? xD;; When you look at it, I found this card is quite balanced ^^; great card IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grndmaster Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Archas? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 this card is ov'pw with the 'draw 2 cards' effect........take that out and it should be fine......7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Change to with a DEF of 2000 or less, good pic, raise ATK to 2200, face-up Attack Position, take out the no Normal Summon effect, good effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Damage Calculation_____________________________________ Take out the lettering in the bottom corners of the pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexanort Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 thx 4 comment, i'll fix the error later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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