Thomas Wolf Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I didn't catch the once in the game part, nvm than. Also, I ment to say that I wouldn't say the pic is over used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 i see your opinion now 5 new cards has been added leave a comment+rate+fix+ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 All the amendments will be done due to my help. Most of these cards have effects completely identical to real-life cards, thus lacking originality. But I will correct a few of these cards. Ministry Of Darkness Each time damage (except Battle Damage & the effect of "Ministry of Darkness") is inflicted to your opponent's Life Points,inflict 200 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points Rise OF Darkness Special Summon 1 "Dark Lady" Monster in your Graveyard. Evil Twins Of Darkness When this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle you can Special Summon a Level 4 or below (recommended)"Dark Lady" on its name from your Deck to the field. then shuffle your Deck Mysterious Beyond Discard 2 Monster from your hand that has "Dark Lady" on its nameto Negate the effect of an Effect MonsterSince when do Spell Cards have the symbol for Counter Traps? Should be Quick-Play! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 thanx dude but you forgot to rate XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyhe Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 thanx dude but you forgot to rate XDrating...fine if you insisted on it. I would say a...6.4/10. Since most of your cards have effects based on (or completely identical to) already-existing cards, I can't say much of them. The Dark Ladies seem to be an archtype, but they have no unique playstyle or overall strategy, something that an archtype ought to have nowadays. I would suggest that you should see other's works & learn from them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 i respect your opinion thanx new card will be added soonplz leave comments Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 some effects are short and simple. pics are good, interesting theme - though its very common Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 thanx anyone who enter this thread plz leave a comments and rate+fix+ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Why do you always use FEMALE images ??effects are still so simple and r'nt linked together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 well i think female cards would make it look better and i dont like using complicated effects or Op effects thats how i see it thats all but thank you 4 your opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 at least make a theme for the dark ladies, since its an archtype, they must have some kind of strategy and effects that link them together try to be creative in your cards and your set will get better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 thax 4 the advice i will keep that in mind u can support me with ideas if u like and fix my card thank u Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I figure out what is up with them they are kinda toolbox....some maeby more cards that let you have the Dark Lady you need in the time you need it...Good Work...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 good idea thank u u can give me ideas about the cards that i will create if like Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Like the new cards and as stated above they're starting to take on a theme of their own :) Keep up the good work and I'll stay posted!8.3/10 for the latest and congrats on reaching popular thread status. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 thanx u can give me ideas about the cards that i will create for this set if u like+1 REP has been added 4 ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Well the secret of toolboxing is have a variety of useful effects, that usually works well in some situations...then you must have some ways to pull out the card you want when you need it. Try to use different efects works against different situations...and then some swarming and tutoring, effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 thanx 4 the advice i will work on it now 2 more cards has been added leave comments+rate+ideas+fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 You keep getting better with every new card. Great job. The one thing I see is unholy wedding may be over powered. Seince the cost just says "all spell counters" you can remove 1 counter and destroy 5 monsters. I would consider revising. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 well thanx for your comment u will see more cards soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 You should get a booster for that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 I think these have the correct OCG. Soul Destroyer:As long this card remains face-up on the field, when a "Dark Lady" monster you control destroys a monster as result of battle, that monster is removed from play, when a monster is removed from play by this card effect, draw 1 card. Second Chance:When a "Dark Lady" monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Dark Lady" monster with a lower level than the destroyed monster. Great cards though. You're set's shaping up great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 26, 2008 I think these have the correct OCG. Soul Destroyer:As long this card remains face-up on the field' date=' when a "Dark Lady" monster you control destroys a monster as result of battle, that monster is removed from play, when a monster is removed from play by this card effect, draw 1 card. Second Chance:When a "Dark Lady" monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Dark Lady" monster with a lower level than the destroyed monster. Great cards though. You're set's shaping up great.[/quote'] thanx i shall work at your advice You should get a booster for that what do u mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 I think these have the correct OCG. Soul Destroyer:As long this card remains face-up on the field' date=' when a "Dark Lady" monster you control destroys a monster as result of battle, that monster is removed from play, when a monster is removed from play by this card effect, draw 1 card. Second Chance:When a "Dark Lady" monster you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Dark Lady" monster with a lower level than the destroyed monster. Great cards though. You're set's shaping up great.[/quote'] thanx i shall work at your advice You should get a booster for that what do u mean?Just get an official booster pack for this set of cards' date='you can get them from a shop,I prefer pits of inferno.[/color'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 oh i seewhich shop sould i go? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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