Future L Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 i suggest you take out the draw effect....other than that.....it seems balance.....*pix could use some cropping/backing.... btw... its quite ecchi... the girls are grabing eachother....6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 nice pics7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Pic needs color in background, edited slightly, I would take out the 2nd effect out, add an effect that would fit better. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Pic needs a background and coloring. It is also a pic of 2 girls grabbing eachother. I don't know if the rules will go after that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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