NineteenHundred Posted December 17, 2008 Report Share Posted December 17, 2008 Art is made by me. [spoiler=Effect]This card gains 600 ATK for each Equip Card equipped to it. You can switch 1 Equip Spell Card equipped to a monster to another correct targer (other than this card). During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Rate, hate, and leave by advice. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Equip Spell Card (other than this card) = (except this card)_________________________________________ Pic looks pretty good. Background kinda goes with it. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Solid OCG, pic is well made, though the background dosen't quite suit it, 8.1/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 When and how often can you move equip cards around? As it is written right now, you could have 5 monsters out on the field and put all of your equip cards on each monster when you attack (eg: monster 1 attacks with 3 equips, monster 2 attacks; but you can moven equips, so he has the same 3 equips...etc). Also targer=target, parentheses are not needed around "other than this card" and should be re-worded as demented said. Pic is good, considering all you used was paint. I agree that the BG pic should be changed; maybe to something darker? Overall, I give it a 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hayden351 Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 i think you need to re paint the "equipment empress" i looks weird.sweet effectgood backroundif its an empress it should be stronger more 2200 atk and 1400 defmake stars up to 6 if you follow my other suggetioni say 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 BG doesnt fit card, also pic isnt positioned or styled, its just a forfront view, which isnt too exciting, maybe a 'retro' Dark Magician' pose pic isnt to well done, is quite mediocre. good OCG and interesting effect. (BTW, i am very, very, very picky about art!)so dont take it as offence, just to improve. (critism) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 OMG... its a stronger 'Maha Valio'.. <-or however you spell that cards name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Change to (except this card), pic needs work, good effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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