Terra, the Mistress of the Land (Please Rate!!)

[balevolence]

This monster cannot be attacked as long as there is another EARTH monster on the field. This monster gains 3000 atk if there are 5 or more EARTH monsters removed from play. As long as this card is on the field your opponent cannot remove monsters you control from play. Once per turn you can remove one EARTH monster in your graveyard from play to increase your lifepoints by half that monsters def, if you do you skip your next draw-phase.

[xxdemonicfuxoffxx]

ocg errors

change def to 2000

oped in the final effect

 

This monster cannot be selected as the target of an attack as long as there is another face-up EARTH monster on your field. This monster gains 3000 ATK if there are 5 or more EARTH monsters removed from play. As long as this card is face-up on your field, your opponent cannot remove monsters you control from play. Once per turn, you can pay 1000 Life Points to remove one EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play. If you use this effect, skip your next Draw Phase.

 

change the pic, its a bit too sleazy, u might get banned

 

7/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

ocg errors

change def to 2000

oped in the final effect

 

This monster cannot be selected as an attack target as long as there is another face-up EARTH monster on your field. This monster gains 3000 ATK if there are 5 or more EARTH monsters removed from play. As long as this card is face-up on your field' date=' your opponent cannot remove monsters you control from play. Once per turn, during your [b'][insert Phase Here][/b], you can pay 1000 Life Points to remove one EARTH monster in your Graveyard from play. If you use this effect, skip your next Draw Phase.

 

Fixed.

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The Pic isn't really showing anything "bad", though you might want to edit the title and add something like: "PG-13 Warning"

[Professor Cobra]

Change to Once per turn, you can remove 1, Graveyard, Life Points, by half of the monsters original DEF, If you use this effect, skip your next Battle Phase. Change Level to 6, ATK to 2300. 8/10

[balevolence]

thanx for the help :)

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

You are new. Don't be ashamed of that, especially when you're making cards like this! This card does need some work, but for someone that hasn't been on the forums that long, it's top notch! I give it a 9.9999/10.

[Phantasy Dreamz]

WOW........ is she even wearing anything under................

 

[/topic] cards tad ov'pw

[balevolence]

....Bump.....