Ancient Beast Minotaur

[Hexanort]

 

[spoiler=lore] This card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Special Summoned by effect of "Summoning Of The Ancient Beast". If this card is Special Summoned successfully destroy all monster on your field except this card, and place Soul Counter on this card equal than number of monster destroyed. Increase this card ATK by 100 for Each Soul Counter on this card. If this card battle a Defense Position monster, whose DEF is lower than this card ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your Opponent's Life Points.If this card destroy a monster on your opponent's field, you can remove 1 Soul Counter on this card to negate the effect of the destroyed monster, and remove the destroyed monster from play. If the number of Soul Counter on this card is 0, this card ATK and DEF is halved.

 

 

 

[spoiler=lore] You can only activate this card During your End Phase. Release 2 monster you control,Then toss a Coin, If the results are Head Special Summon 1 "Ancient Beast Minotaur" from your Deck.If the results are tail,Discard 1 card from the top of your Deck, and then toss a coin again until the result of the coin are head.Each time the result of the coin is tail, Place 1 Soul Counter on this card.If the result of the Coin are head, Remove all soul counter on this card and Place the same number of Soul Counter on the Special Summoned monster.

 

 

pic credit:

http://th06.deviantart.com/fs17/300W/i/2007/200/b/a/Alien_warrior_by_TARGETE.jpg

http://th09.deviantart.com/fs21/150/i/2007/234/1/6/Dark_well_by_TARGETE.jpg

 

rate,comment and correction is wanted and appreciated.

[***Rapscallion***]

nice and complex, I give you a good 9.6/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

(Second card) - Usually the description for heads comes first.

 

Not bad though.

 

8.5/10

[OMGAKITTY]

First card:

This card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Special Summoned by effect of "Summoning Of The Ancient Beast". If this card is Special Summoned successfully, destroy all monsters on your field except this card, and place Soul Counters on this card equal to the number of monsters destroyed. Increase this card's ATK by 100 for each Soul Counter on this card. If this card battles a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. If this card destroys a monster on your opponent's field, you can remove 1 Soul Counter on this card to negate the effect of the destroyed monster, and remove the destroyed monster from play. If the number of Soul Counter on this card is 0, this card ATK and DEF is halved.

 

Not bad. The effects feel kind of cluttered to me....

 

Second Card:

You can only activate this card during your End Phase. Tribute 2 monsters you control, and toss a coin. If the result is heads, Special Summon 1 "Ancient Beast Minotaur" from your Deck. If the result is tails, discard 1 card from the top of your Deck, and then toss a coin again until the result of the coin toss is heads.Each time the result of the coin is tails, Place 1 Soul Counter on this card. If the result of the coin toss is heads, remove all Soul Counters on this card and place the same number of Soul Counter on the Special Summoned monster.

 

A lot of (English) grammar issues....

And quite a bit of unnecessary capitalization.

[Professor Cobra]

Lower case during, remove, place and then, good pics, If Heads, If Tails, lower Level to 7, or swap the ATK with the DEF, add a comma after successfully. 7/10

[ITI3L33]

There is some improper grammar and some OCG errors.

 

Not much though.

 

8/10