Shrekstasy Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 I need C+C. I need help with the face. Edit: Mine's the one on the right. Update:Typhoon Palmer(?)+Hippowdon Update2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
speznats Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 i think its cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Hmm... It still needs something... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Digital.Simplicity. Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Wow that looks cool make me a 3 tailed beast one or a madara one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 It's awesome, but it can get even better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 That is excellent, maybe put a darker border around the hair? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 You know what would be EPIC? Use some sand from Hippowdon! ^_^Great idea! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Hardcore. You should do a Shikamaru. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 Yeah, sand would add an amazing touch ^_^ Still, nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 This is really good mate =P keep them coming =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted December 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 You know what would be EPIC? Use some sand from Hippowdon! ^_^Great idea! Yeah' date=' sand would add an amazing touch ^_^ Still, nice job.[/quote'] Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 I don't likey the hair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 It is better with the sand, although the sand looks a bit too suspended in the air, meaning it doesn't look like there's any gravity in the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I don't likey the hair. Fixed. It is better with the sand' date=' although the sand looks a bit too suspended in the air, meaning it doesn't look like there's any gravity in the picture.[/quote'] He has the ability to control and suspend sand. It's supposed to be that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jappio Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Well one thing I noticed from far away was the eyes. They seem really odd, they almost look like Robin's mask more than normal eyes. Their position seems messed up too, and it seems to make the whole face look a little awkward, I think those hair changes you made contributed to that. The mouth and nose also seem messed up due to the changes to that area, it almsot looks like he has some stupid smirk even. The belt blends into the undershirt. Now I get it's not suppose to be an undershirt, but you didn't represent it properlly. The red coat stille looks like is overlapping it, versus the the way it should be done oppositely. The two ways to make this work is either drop the attempt at making Garra's outfit and instead just go with the other guys. Or you have to do more editting to make it work. You took a middle path, which makes it look half done and messes things up. The color of the pants don't quite match the color of the other pants very well. Along with that there seems to be a flatness in general on the clothing. The gord on the back could be shown a little better. What you did was Ok, but at the same time it's hard to see what it is. Moving the gord a little to the right could help people see it's shape, while not messing too much up. The feet also look a little weird the way you have them, don't seem to match the other sprite very well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I don't likey the hair. Fixed. It is better with the sand' date=' although the sand looks a bit too suspended in the air, meaning it doesn't look like there's any gravity in the picture.[/quote'] He has the ability to control and suspend sand. It's supposed to be that way. Hmm. It just looks wrong on a sprite splice. The thing is it just looks like a thick line of sand with random curves.Anyways, that's my opinion. Great job! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Shadows Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Yeah Nice Sand! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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