Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 [spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard. This card is also treated as a Dragon-Type monster while in your hand or on the field. If this is the only FIRE monster you control, your opponent cannot select this monster as an attack target. Once per turn, you can send 1 Dragon-Type monster and 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand or your field to the Graveyard to inflict 1200 damage to your opponent's Life Points. If you use this effect, you cannot attack this turn. Art by ME!!!! Made on Paint and edited on GIMP and Paint. Sorry, I know it's kinda blurry. Next original pic will be better (Keep an eye out for it!). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Very nice. ^_^ Just 1 error though: your side of the field = your field_______________________________________ 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 image comment, shouldnt the part under the arm be linked to the shoulder, the muscle below the neck should conect to the back, so i know its out of proportion, just stretch the back so it goes to the back properly, cos the arm looks like its floating, also, an animal of such speicaes wouldnt require wings which are so small, the shear weight of that muscled up dragon/drake wouldnt allow the wings to give it flight its abdomen and waist need widening, it looks like a match :/, it'll fall over. thats just critism on the picture/art, im really picky sorry. and if you read that, well done, it means you actually care about your cards and art, adn you should be rewarded for taking so long to imporve your art. OCG was fixed by 'Demented', pretty good :) (I HAVE REDRAWN YOUR CARD ON PAINT, BELOW!)[spoiler=redraw] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 image comment' date=' shouldnt the part under the arm be linked to the shoulder, the muscle below the neck should conect to the back, so i know its out of proportion, just stretch the back so it goes to the back properly, cos the arm looks like its floating, also, an animal of such speicaes wouldnt require wings which are so small, the shear weight of that muscled up dragon/drake wouldnt allow the wings to give it flight its abdomen and waist need widening, it looks like a match :/, it'll fall over. thats just critism on the picture/art, im really picky sorry. and if you read that, well done, it means you actually care about your cards and art, adn you should be rewarded for taking so long to imporve your art. OCG was fixed by 'Demented', pretty good :)[/quote'] ----OCG FIXED---- Thanks for the critique (Both of you!). I wont be changing the pic, just b/c it was my first one for YCM and was mostly in the interest of self-education. You wll see that my next pic (which will be on my 4-star celebration card) will be better (but not perfect by any means). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 BTW, if u look, i edited the picture, to give you an idea of what i mean, not sating you have to change it, sjut for help and guidlines in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 BTW' date=' if u look, i edited the picture, to give you an idea of what i mean, not sating you have to change it, sjut for help and guidlines in the future.[/quote'] Thanks. You not only helped me out greatly, you made me laugh too. That was awesome. I'm gonna +rep you for that lmao! Most awesome positive criticism EVER!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 :lol: im obsessed with drawing and artwork, so i had to, your art skills are good, jsut need to concept your proportion. but i did complain about hte wings for too long i spose :lol: im a funny guy i guess :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 :lol: im obsessed with drawing and artwork' date=' so i had to, your art skills are good, jsut need to concept your proportion. but i did complain about hte wings for too long i spose :lol: im a funny guy i guess :lol:[/quote'] You're just plain awesome. That's all there is to it. If I PM you the pic for my 4-star celebratory card, do you think you could critique it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 i spose, im always open for PM or card/pic analysis. and im plain awesome XD :lol: dont read my profile then :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 If you use this effect, you cannot attack. Okay pic, change 1500 to 1000, raise Level to 6. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 If you use this effect' date=' you cannot attack. Okay pic, change 1500 to 1000, raise Level to 6. 8/10[/quote'] Thanks ^_^EDIT: Updated Level/stats/effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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