TwistedFlameApe Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 this is the first D-hero ive ever made. is it any good? all critisizims are good by me! ^^ This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 "Destiny Hero" monsters. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's field and sends it to the Graveyard, put 1 Destiny Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard Special Summon 1 Demise Token (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) for each Demise Counter that was on this card in Defense Position on your side of the field. Thanks to CrimsonWolf896 I made a Spell Card to go along with my monster. please rate and give opinions. thank you! ^^ Activate only when there is at least 1 Demise Token on the field. Destroy all Demise Tokens on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Demise Tokens destroyed by this effect times 200. If 5 Demise Tokens are destroyed by this card's effect destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field and inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed times 300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Change to Tributing 3 "Destiny Hero" monsters, good pic, change Level to 9, add a comma after Graveyard, Defense Position. Take out 100 ATK bonus. It's powerful enough as is. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 card changed! ^^ thanks very much for the tips. Oh wow... i didnt even notice it was Professor Cobra. If these are all the changes you've found then hopefully that means im getting better ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Pretty good! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Thanks! ^^ keep em comin please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Pretty cool though you should make some sort of Spell or Trap that makes use of the destiny counters there isn't already. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanks for the idea. i wanted to incorperate it into the effect but i couldnt think of anything. ill get on that tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Overused pic, but not too bad for D-Hero Support. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 thanks! i saw one of your cards in a contest and was amazed so that coming from u is huge for me. and sorry about the pic. i actually have never seen it used on here before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knightmare™ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 He is right that pic has been used alot. The errors pointed out by Professor Cobra were all and have been fixed. Good effect. 8/10Prince Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Needs some commas in places. Good OCG overall! I am pleased. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 wow.. im stupid... thanks for pointing out the commas. if i hadnt just looked them over carefully i wouldnt have noticed that i stupidly made my spell a continuous Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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