Zabuza Momochi, Swordsman of Eternity

[Zabuza Co.]

Hey everyone,

 

This is one of my first cards, and I plan to make more Eternity cards.

 

Here he is:

 

 

Effect:

 

Whenever another monster tries to attack another Swordsman on the field, Zabuza will intercept the attack, whether it is chosen or not. Zabuza is not affected by such Trap or Magic Cards as: Trap Hole, Dark Hole, Raigeki, or Change of Heart, and all other monster-destroying effects.

 

Remember, this is my first card, so it's gonna need a lot of work.[/code]

[Bud Zero]

you should put swordsman as sub type 4/10

[Nocturnal flame]

whats an eternity card?

 

nice pic and great for first try but ocg errors......

 

6/10

[Radiant F.U.R.Y.™]

Needs work...3/10 for an experienced member, but since you're new...5.9/10.

[Shocked]

Change the Swordman-Type to Warrior-Type

Change LIGHT Attribute to WATER Attribute

Need a lot of work on the OCG

Pic is okay

6/10 for you

[Senbanzakura]

Your OCG is off, the pic needs to either be re sized or changed. Good try though, keep working at it! 6/10

[.Gideon.]

I suggest u go read some real yugioh cards, becuase your OCG is ..... BAD

LIGHT > WATER

sworsman > Warrior

realistic cards forum > pop culture cards furum

 

3/10

[Jace Beleren]

overpowerd ATK/DEF

fake type

overpowered effect

ocg errors

4/10

[Dragon™]

Here is the wrong effect:

Effect:

 

Whenever another monster tries to attack another Swordsman on the field, Zabuza will intercept the attack, whether it is chosen or not. Zabuza is not affected by such Trap or Magic Cards as: Trap Hole, Dark Hole, Raigeki, or Change of Heart, and all other monster-destroying effects.

 

Here is the correct effect:

Effect:

 

When a face-up Warrior-type monster is attacked, and there is a face-up "Zabuza Momochi, Swordsman or Eternity" face- up on your side of the field, the ATK is negated. All face-up "Zabuza, Swordsman of Eternity" are not affected by the effect of Spell, Trap, or monster card Effect(s).

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BTW, 4.9

[Knightmare™]

good pic. major OCG errors. the effect is a litlle overpowered. 5/10 as your a new member.

Prince

[Sigma]

OP'ed, OCG Errors fixed by people, should belong in Pop Culture. IMG Credit is needed, so please get that in. 4/10