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[partypooper]

i hope u don't call it overpowerd because its an good card

[∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮]

 

you should put it in the post, not the title.And, yes, it is overpowered,very much so.3/10

[everquest5]

0/10

[LiAM]

OP,

name is uncapatliezed

you cant give an effect mosnter flavour text, it HAS to have an effect

bad picture

wrong type (EARTH)

divine beast=dinosaur

ATK 6000, DEF 7000 = ATK 2500-2900, DEF= 2000-2600.

 

unless of course hte effect edits or requires some ctonrol over ATKa and DEF in which case, hihger or lower respecitvly,

(this is constcutive critisism)

bad attempt for a card, and post your card in the thread message not title.

 

0.6/10

[Otaku-sama]

Terrible OCG, terrible subject, terrible pic.

Overal Terribleness

Pokemon should not be in YuGiOh as they have their own (stupid) card game already.

 

-10/10

[TurboTom]

Come on people, hes only new!

 

Anyway though, you still have a lot to learn. personally, when i first started making cards, i compared my ideas with actual YuGiOh cards so that 1. i couls get some ideas and 2. so i can get the OCG right (that being the grammer), as well as making the cards as ballanced as possible.

 

As for this card, the pokemon itself isn't that strong, as even a Legendary pokemon would have 6000 ATK points unless it had an effect that would, for example, make it harder for you to summon it, to keep it balanced. If you need any pointers about how to keep your cards fair and balanced, just check out the Tutorials Section (or something like that) and PM me if you have to.

 

Oh, and i agree with mikooo, next time put the actual card in the post, not the title, as i've noticed that the harder it is to see someones card, the less likely that we're going to attempt to bother looking at it, which is incredably lazy of us, but its kinda true! :mrgreen:

[~Shore]

idk tom, it seems like its not much work to figure out that an EFFECT monster has an EFFECT

[~ Chidori-Kun]

0.000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000010/10

[jamie1996]

Come on people' date=' hes only new!

 

Anyway though, you still have a lot to learn. personally, when i first started making cards, i compared my ideas with actual YuGiOh cards so that 1. i couls get some ideas and 2. so i can get the OCG right (that being the grammer), as well as making the cards as ballanced as possible.

 

As for this card, the pokemon itself isn't that strong, as even a Legendary pokemon would have 6000 ATK points unless it had an effect that would, for example, make it harder for you to summon it, to keep it balanced. If you need any pointers about how to keep your cards fair and balanced, just check out the Tutorials Section (or something like that) and PM me if you have to.

 

Oh, and i agree with mikooo, next time put the actual card in the post, not the title, as i've noticed that the harder it is to see someones card, the less likely that we're going to attempt to bother looking at it, which is incredably lazy of us, but its kinda true! :mrgreen:

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hey tom im new too but partypooper is one of my class i telled him that he must choose the good pics that must i do too but i said too that he not overpower the cards i give him a 0,0/10 sorry wesley you are smart turbotom

[Megayanma]

Truth be told, this is an incredibly sad card. I'm sorry to say this, but NEVER EVER EVERRRRRR use Divine-Beast type.

 

 

Besides that, the actual Pokemon Rampardos is reletavely weak. Maybe enough for 2300-2500 ATK, but not 6000. No Yugioh (tournament legal) card to DATE has 6000 ATK.

[.arx]

Op'ed, Name's not capitilizzed, overpowered OCG errors, Blurry Pic.

 

OP'ed: -2

Un capitilized name: -1

overpowered: -2

Ocg errors: -4

Blurry Pic:- 1

 

0/10.