TwistedFlameApe Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 This set is still under construction but i would be pleased to hear any critisisims you all might have! [spoiler=Monsters]This card can only be Tribute Summoned by Tributing 3 "Destiny Hero" monsters. When this card destroys a monster on your opponent's field and sends it to the Graveyard, put 1 Destiny Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon 1 "Demise Token" (Warrior-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK 500/DEF 500) for each Demise Counter that was on this card in Defense Position to your field. If this card is added to your hand by the effect of a card Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position of the field. If this card is Special Summoned successfully, add up to 2 DARK monsters from your Deck to your hand. The original ATK of this card becomes the number of Demise Tokens on the field times 1000. Each time a Demise Token is removed from the field put 1 Destruction Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is removed from the field destroy cards on the field equal to the amount of Destruction Counters on this card. The original DEF of this card becomes the number of Demise Tokens on the field times 1000. Each time a Demise Token is removed from the field put 1 Discard Counter on this card (max. 5). When this card is removed from the field both players discard cards from their Hand equal to the amount of Discard Counters on this card. The original ATK of this card becomes the number of Counters on the field x200. If this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, remove all Counters from all cards on the field, then inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Counters removed x400. If this card is targetted by an Equip Spell Card, destroy this card and send it to the Graveyard. If "Destiny Hero Demise Knight" is on your side of the field, halve the ATK of this card. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, distribute all types of Counters among all cards that can take them until they are at max. [spoiler=Spells]Increase the ATK of all DARK Warrior-Type monsters on the field by 500 points. Each time a DARK Warrior-Type monster inflicts direct damage the controller of that card may send 1 card from his/her hand to the Graveyard in order to Special Summon 1 "Destiny Hero" to the field in face-up Attack Position. [spoiler=Traps]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, "Demise Tokens" on your field cannot be destroyed by battle or change battle positions. Activate only when there is at least 1 "Demise Token" on the field. Destroy all "Demise Tokens" on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of "Demise Tokens" destroyed by this card's effect x200. If 5 "Demise Tokens" are destroyed by this card's effect, destroy all monsters on your opponent's side of the field and inflict damage equal to the number of cards destroyed x300. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Queen-Dragoon Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Fantastic start. Demise of the land is a bit powerful. Maybe change the summoning condition to a direct attack? The attack points of Restrained Fighter should be a lot lower with an effect that strong. Maybe even as low as 1500/1200. Doing a brilliant job though. The rest of the cards are great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 thanks for the positive replies ^^ well as far as restrained fighter goes i think 2000 might be good? EDIT:i decided you were right about 1500 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 modifications made pending comments I got on another thread about the card "Demise of the Warrior" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 2 errors: side fo the field = field Hand = hand_____________________________________ I like the pics on these. ^_^ 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chargerfan Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 Fantastic start. Demise of the land is a bit powerful. Maybe change the summoning condition to a direct attack? The attack points of Restrained Fighter should be a lot lower with an effect that strong. Maybe even as low as 1500/1200. Doing a brilliant job though. The rest of the cards are great.i agree fully Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 thanks every1! ^_^ i love all the feedback and thanks for the positives =) (edited to Demented and Queen-Dragoon's specifications) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 Demise of the land is a real card name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 it is? wow im sorry. lol.. i wasnt aware of that.. apparently I dont know all the card names yet. edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 .:bump:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 .:bumpitty bump bump:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 just upgraded cards. found an error in ocg i didnt put "" around the token names. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 great, i saw a couple OCG's, but other than that it is fine9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 did you really? dangit. i thought i nabbed all of those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 .:bump:. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 I see no OCG errors. Perfect 10/10!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:lol::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TwistedFlameApe Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 thanks^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revan Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 eh. 8.01/12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlienHero22 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 ........10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted June 11, 2009 Report Share Posted June 11, 2009 9/10 I really like the set, but there are a few mistakes with commas and capitalization that I saw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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