Thomas Wolf Posted December 20, 2008 Report Share Posted December 20, 2008 Art credit is in the card creator section as usual. I was going to make 40 cards, but I'm pretty much spent on ideas so this is it. I'm shooting for an average rating of 9/10, so let's see. Chain Tamer Effect: If this card is Normal Summoned negate its effect. Select 1 monster your opponent controls and change its Battle Position. This monster cannot attack the selected monster. As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field the selected monster cannot change its Battle Positon, attack, or be destroyed in battle. Only 1 monster can be selected with the effect at a time.When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Night Warrior" monster from your hand. While that monster is on the feild, this card cannot be attacked. If that monster is destroyed while you control this face-up monster, Special Summon 1 "Night Warrior Chain Master" from your hand or add 1 "Night Warrior Chain Master" from your deck to your hand.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand during your opponent's Battle Phase when 3 "Night Warrior" monsters are destroyed by battle. When this card is Special Summoned your opponent selects 1 monster they control. Destroy all monster on the feild except this monster and the 1 your opponent selected.This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can be Special Summoned from your hand by removing 3 "Night Warrior" monster in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase Tribute 1 "Night Warrior" monster you control increase this card's ATK by 1000 until the End Phase. When this card is destroyed, Special Summon 1 "Night Warrior" monster removed from play for the Summon of this card. Whenever a "Night Warrior" monster is destroyed by battle this card gains 1 Moon Counter. During your Main Phase 1 remove 2 Moon Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower "Night Warrior" Monster from your hand or remove 4 Night Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 level 5 or higher "Night Warrior" monster from your hand. This effect can only be activated once per turn. If this card would be destroyed, remove all Moon Counters from it insted. I'm pretty proud of this set, and want any suggestions to improve. So please rate and comment. I feel some of them my be Over Powered. But this is the largest set I've made so keeping them all compleatly balenced and unique was a struggle toward the end. The one thing I don't want mentioned is how blurry pics are. If a picture is blurry it's because I couldn't find anything better to use. Other than that, any comments are acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Bishop Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 6.4/10 Good Try! :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Thanks for rating. Any ideas for how I can improve in the future? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 you could try and give backgrounds to 2 of the cards they are quite good, 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Thanks for the advice. Lol, if I had Photoshop I would take it too. But sadly, I don't want to try and do it in MSpaint. Thanks for the rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gnome_Man Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I find that your spell cards are the worst in terms of being overpowered, and there're some OCG errors. Otherwise, some of these are definitely wanted in my deck. 8.9999999/10, just to bug you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bart1307 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Wow Well Done 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AxelMiles Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 9/10 Simple but powerful, but you really write so fast.....Fix these grammar errors.Your Deck is pretty balanced. Good Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Crokan80 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 It was a good try.Apart from the OCG errors and one or two of your Spell cards being overpowered, I think you did alright. For your effort, you can have a 9/10 from me! D.C.80 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ronnelcruz172 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Yeah, I realised the errors I made when typing. I'll keep that in mind from now on. Also, I've reviewed the cards and can see where afew of them are overpowered. But as I said, this was a big set for me so it was hard to keep everything balenced. Anyway, thanks for the ratings guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 If you ignore ocg errors and overpowered. ur cards deserve 20/10. The reason is ive never seen a set that has a picture that explains the name so well. Like sky hunter. The guy is falling from the sky with a sword. AMAZING.......except for grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Thanks Benny. The mains reason I the name and pic fit so well together was because, the way I made the cards was Pic first, than Name, and finally Effect. I'm really glad to see that there was a reason I was proud of these cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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