Dekthel, Keeper of the Trident

[Rabidhamster1]

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing 2 WATER monsters from your field. Each Battle Phase, you may pay 800 Life Points to attack 3 times. If there are no monsters on your opponent's field, reduce this card's ATK by 1300 during the Battle Phase. Each Main Phase, you may discard 2 cards in your hand to add 1 Equip Spell card to your hand from the deck. If this card is destroyed, flip a coin. If the coin lands heads, inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of the DEF of the two tributed monsters combined. This card is then removed from play. If tails, you may pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon this card on to your field. If you do not Special Summon this card, remove it from play.

[Exiro]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing 2 WATER monsters from your field. Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase 1, by paying 800 Life Points, this card can attack thrice this turn.[/i'] If your opponent controls no monsters, reduce this card's ATK by 1300 during the Battle Phase. Each Main Phase, you may discard 2 cards in your hand to add 1 Equip Spell card to your hand from the deck. When this card is destroyed, toss a coin. ● Heads: Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of the DEF of the two tributed monsters combined. This card is then removed from play. ● Tails: you may pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon this card on to your field. If you do not Special Summon this card, remove it from play.

 

The parts I've changed are in italic.

That's the OCG that I suggest, because yours isn't completely correct.

 

Other than that, I think this card contains too many effects that don't seem to have anything to do with each other.

You could.... tear this card in two pieces and both of those pieces would be a complete card...

 

7,47/10

[Shocked]

Good OCG

Post the Image Credit

8/10

[.:|Fallen|:.]

nice card but needs imge creidit

7.99/10

[.Gideon.]

many effects , OCG errors ,

 

 

7/10

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by Tributing 2 WATER monsters from your field. Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase 1, by paying 800 Life Points, this card can attack [b']3 times[/b] this turn. If your opponent controls no monsters, this card loses 1300 ATK during the Battle Phase. Each Main Phase, you can discard 2 cards in your hand to add 1 Equip Spell Card to your hand from the Deck. When this card is destroyed, flip a coin. ● Heads: Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to half of the DEF of the two tributed monsters combined. This card is then removed from play. ● Tails: you can pay 2000 Life Points to Special Summon this card to your field. If you do not Special Summon this card, remove it from play.

 

Re-fixed.