Cyber Altair Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I haven't done a card in a while =P I tried as much as possible to fix the OCG but there might but some mistakes =\ Anyway do not rate as in "cool 8/10" or something like that. Tell me what do you think of it and if you like or not. Enjoy =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Whats with the name? The OCG looks good to me, but 2000 LP is a bit much. Maybe 800 but 2000 is a little pricey IMO. Other than that this is a good card so 9/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 A nice effect, I like it. However, i'd say it's overpowered. 2000 life points every turn seems like quite alot just to discard one of your opponent's cards. I'd say lower it to 1000 or so. I also noticed some OCG errors: opponents = opponent'sHand = handFace-Up = face-up Good overall, i'd just say lower the payment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JG. Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Hand = handFace-Up = face-up Othereise good card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon™ Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 hmm... spire did correct the opponents thing to opponent´s, but spire corrected it to new ocg, and i believe cyber is using OLD ocg so, i believe the opponents thing is correct. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enrise Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 ...Hmmm, well, can't really spot the OCG Errors, Spire did that for me. All I can say is, just lower the LP Cost, and your good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber Altair Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Since the card doesn't state randomly it means you can discard any card you want so that's a bit of an advantage. Besides this card can be easily summoned meaning if I reduce the cost to 1000 I will easily be capable of discarding meaning if destroyed I get it back free of cost. Also thanks for pointing that out guys, I realize my OCG isn't perfect =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
42.42.564 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 kewl 8/10...lulzseriously now..but ur rebirth condition only limited to "removed from play", unless u have that set up else it is simply discarding ur opponent's card by paying 2000. first time i read i though u have to pay 2000 life points each turn i was like omg.. (maybe u can add "you can pay...") so even if you lower the price, it doesn't mean u "CAN" always get it back.aside to that it is a good card, i see that luck is involved in this card..if u discarded an useless card from ur opponent, i guess he will not risk to allow this monster to reborn :) not to mention that to get ur card removed from play isn't easyit is okay as it is, if you are gonna have that card as the prelude of something bigger u are planning like destroying the world... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Add a comma after turn, lower case hand, his/her to their, add a comma after play, face-up. Change the name of the thread please. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 lower the payment to about 700 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Father Wolf Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 1 card = 1000 lp ppl look at confiscation and soul taker.1000lp cost should be perfect. also no credit given to me T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazy_kid_ac3 Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 I Like But Lower the cost to like 800 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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