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Don't be harsh on me cuz it's my first YGO invention ever.

 

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Lore: A monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 800 and decreases its DEF by 300. The equipped monster is returned to the owner's hand during the second End Phase after this card's activation.

 

Edit: Seto Kaiba666 suggestion about OCG.

 

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Lore: Monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 800 and decreases its DEF by 300. Monster equipped with this card is returned to owners hand after 2nd turn this card is activated.

 

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Lore: A monster equipped with this card increases its ATK by 800 and decreases its DEF by 300. The equipped monster is returned to the owner's hand during the second End Phase after this card's activation.

 

its a good card for the first one ever made. just a few ocg errors. 7/10

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Picture: 6/10 (1 tenth of it is a personal opinion :S)

OCG: 5/10

General Idea: 7/10

 

Total: 6/10

 

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You spelt Dwarves wrong.

Dude... You made a Counter Spell card.

 

But don't worry; good cards come with experience.

 

 

no they dont' date=' good cards come form actually playing the game ¬¬ not just from hearing about it. i hate noobs that cant make cards properly >:@. its easy, all you have to do is think... does this sound right

eg.

NOOB: This card isnt killed by monsters.

REAL: This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.

 

no critisising ur card, the only problem is tiny OCG and counter spell. thats it,.[hr']

According to THIS' date=' it's allowed to spell dwarf in plural dwarfs.

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What do you mean by that?

 

BTW dwarf's as plural is like s

 

Dwarf's : the DWARF'S have a glass of milk

DWARVES: there are several DWARVES.

 

if something ends in an S, it means something belongs to it or is for tha, a group of somehing has a different spelling , eg, Cactus= cacti.

 

(octopus=opctopus's .) [ in english, if a word nds in S already, its just Likes' not Likes's.]

 

(im taking english literature.)

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Picture: 6/10 (1 tenth of it is a personal opinion :S)

OCG: 5/10

General Idea: 7/10

 

Total: 6/10

 

No image credit.

You spelt Dwarves wrong.

Dude... You made a Counter Spell card.

 

But don't worry; good cards come with experience.

 

 

no they dont' date=' good cards come form actually playing the game ¬¬ not just from hearing about it. i hate noobs that cant make cards properly >:@. its easy, all you have to do is think... does this sound right

eg.

NOOB: This card isnt killed by monsters.

REAL: This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.

 

no critisising ur card, the only problem is tiny OCG and counter spell. thats it,.[hr']

According to THIS' date=' it's allowed to spell dwarf in plural dwarfs.

1 more thing, you need image credit

What do you mean by that?

 

BTW dwarf's as plural is like s

 

Dwarf's : the DWARF'S have a glass of milk

DWARVES: there are several DWARVES.

 

if something ends in an S, it means something belongs to it or is for tha, a group of somehing has a different spelling , eg, Cactus= cacti.

 

(octopus=opctopus's .) [ in english, if a word nds in S already, its just Likes' not Likes's.]

 

(im taking english literature.)

 

I haven't played the game in years, but I still know how to use proper OCG. Playing the game won't help you much with OCG. Referencing real cards does though.

 

As for the dwarfs/dwarves thing: Wow. failgrammar much?

the dwarf's glass of milk

Is how you would use it as a possessive. The way you wrote it is still plural.

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