Pmac Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 This is my first cards, and by that i wanted you to help me improve if something is bad. And i'm portuguese (not brazilian) so sorry by any spelling error that may appear. Please comment & rate. there... I put some effects. And put some new cards. Now, about the type.. I will not change them. its a reference to Sonic heroes and riders. If I change them they will be all beast types and I don´t want thatOh, and the deck isn´t finhised. [spoiler=Firts deck] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I'm half Portuguese, so I understand, my mom has trouble with the language too. So I'll ignore OCG alright ;]Now then, you might want to make some effects on most of your normals, because some users seem to hate that. Other than that, I like the concept, keep up the good work. 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Thanks for the tips.I will updatem (is that the way it is writen?) soon with more cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ira08 Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 (Update them)Close enough haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 too many yellow cardssacrifice=tributeplz no fake types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 too many yellow cardssacrifice=tributeplz no fake typesThe fake tipes are because sonic riders and heroes where they are Fly, speed or power and i though it would bring another sonic element to the game insted of an army of beast tipe card. Im changing some off the yellow and turning them effect. I will update them next week with new cards. And change sacrifice to tribute.Still, thank for the help :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juuzou Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 YOU-NEED-EFFECTS... 'nuff said3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabberwock Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 people here hate cards without effects (or vanillas) i have nothing against thempixs need backgrounds change the types from speed/power/fly to beast or Beast-Warrior Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted December 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 just one question:what´s the problem of yellow cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shore Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 they require no imagination and not much effort since all you have to do is describe the character instead of make an effect that fits the character and makes the gameplay more interesting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PyroWildcat Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Hope you don't mind if I go over some of the biggest things I see wrong; I'm only trying to help: - "Burning Blaze" and "Darkspine Sonic" are not Fusions. - "E-101" is not an Effect monster. - "Flicky" is overpowered. Destroying all of your opponent's monsters should not be that easy. - You need to be more specific with the effect of "Amy Rose". Making that ability usable every turn would be overpowered, so I suggest that it only be usable when "Amy Rose" is first Summoned. - Try running your card descriptions through some sort of Spelling or Grammar check before you put it into the card maker. It will by no means be perfect, but it'll be better than nothing. - Major OCG errors. I'm not going to go into that in any more detail, as there is a thread with handy info on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pmac Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 i dont mind at all. actually, is that the reason i created this post. so thanks i will solve the problems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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