Level Armor Dragon and Necro-Armor Dragon: Two Ultimate Dragons

[Elvryndle]

These are some of my most powerful cards to date, at least when their potential is fully unlocked. If you absolutely have to have them, I am working with a friend to talk to Konami, so that they can be legalized, and then you can send me $2.50 for non-foil and $5.00 for foil versions.

[Shiranui]

Please post the effects. Can't read them. Just so you know the Pic on the right is overused here.

[Elvryndle]

Thanks for letting me know, I just love it, and if I could get my image generator software to work, my images would be even better. But, until then, I just use Google Images. And here, I'll get the effects.

 

Level Armor Dragon: This card can be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except from the Graveyard by removing from play 2 Dragon-Type Monsters and Paying 2000 Life points. This card's original ATK and DEF become the number of Monster Level Stars on your side of the field x300 points. When this card is selected as an attack target by your opponent's monster, inflict Battle Damage to his/her Life Points equal to the attacking monster's Level x200 points. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Level Stars on both sides of the field X100 points. While this card is in the Graveyard, you can pay 3000 Life Points to Special Summon one "Necro-Armor Dragon from your hand or Deck. If this card is Special Summoned from your Graveyard while a "Necro-Armor Dragon" is face-up on your side of the field, increase your Life Points by 2000 points for each face-up "Necro Armor Dragon" on your side of the field.

 

Necro-Armor Dragon: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying 3000 Life Points while at least one "Level Armor Dragon" is in your Graveyard. This card's original ATK and DEF become the number of Monster Level Stars on the field and in your Graveyard x300 points. When this card battles your opponent's monster, inflict Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the Level of your opponent's monster x300 points. When this card is sent to the Graveyard from your hand, Deck, or the Field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Level Stars on the field and in either player's Graveyard x100 points. If there are no "Level Armor Dragons" in your Graveyard at any time while this card is face-up on the field, this card must be removed from play.

---

I need to make some edits to their text, missed quotation marks, de-capitalization, you know. But other than that, what do you think? Oh and there are 3 more in the works, they just need pics, and then I will post them in "Complete Sets": "Ultimate Armor Dragon" (A fusion monster of Level and Necro), "Dark Sentinel of the Abyss" (Another Dragon), and "Chaos Armor Dragon" (A Fusion of Ultimate and Dark Sentinel.") They both (Ultimate and Chaos) have some seriously sweet effects.

---

Oh as for making them legal and people buying them, the friend has an image maker too, so they will look real, and be original, till then i use what i got.

 

Chaos Armor Dragon: "Ultimate Armor Dragon"+"Dark Sentinel of the Abyss"

This card cannot be Summoned except by Fusion Summon. During the End Phase of a Turn in which this card was successfully Fusion Summoned, this card from the field, and "Dark Sentinel of the Abyss," "Ultimate Armor Dragon," "Polymerization," "Level Armor Dragon," "Necro-Armor Dragon," and "Polymerization from the Graveyard are returned to their respective Decks and your Main Deck is shuffled. If any of the cards listed (excluding this card) are not in the Graveyard, do not return them to the Deck(s). Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 300 points for each card in your hand. When you have 6 or more cards in your hand this card can attack directly. If you do this, the damage inflicted is equal to half of this card's ATK. This card can attack additionaly for each Set Spell or Trap card on your side of the field.

[Shiranui]

Hm...from what I can tell these effects are pretty amazing and how they fit together is very well planned. All from a new guy...

10/10

[K.B. strategist]

Field = field

1, not one

 

When this card is sent to the Graveyard from your hand' date=' Deck, or the Field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Level Stars on the field and in either player's Graveyard x100 points[/quote']

 

^If Necro Armor Dragon were legalized, it would be banned shortly afterwards just because of this 1 sentence.

 

Very long effects which make it hard to find more ocg errors or determine the balance of these cards, but I suspect that both of them are rather overpowered.

 

Overall good ocg, effects are original but could be more balanced, pics are okay. Also, if these were to be released the effects would have to be shortened a lot so that we could actually read the effects -.-

 

8.2/10

[Elvryndle]

Hm...from what I can tell these effects are pretty amazing and how they fit together is very well planned. All from a new guy...

10/10

 

Thanks alot. I started inventing cards long before I found this website' date=' this site just let me make them into actual cards instead of written lists.

I actually have over 160 cards made, I just need to finish typing them and find pics for them, if you would like to read them, without pics lemme know and I'll put 'em up. (Wow, 10/10, I've never even SEEN a 10/10, and I get one in my 2nd thread, first one wasn't much of a success, had the dragons and Swordmage Elumane (another of my cards) and no one could find it.)[hr']

Field = field

1' date=' not one

 

When this card is sent to the Graveyard from your hand, Deck, or the Field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Level Stars on the field and in either player's Graveyard x100 points

 

^If Necro Armor Dragon were legalized, it would be banned shortly afterwards just because of this 1 sentence.

 

Very long effects which make it hard to find more ocg errors or determine the balance of these cards, but I suspect that both of them are rather overpowered.

 

Overall good ocg, effects are original but could be more balanced, pics are okay. Also, if these were to be released the effects would have to be shortened a lot so that we could actually read the effects -.-

 

7.9/10

 

I don't think they would be banned because you have to look at it like this: yes you inflict damage, and quite alot if you do it right, but you already have to pay 3000 of your own Life Points, and first have Level Armor destroyed to Summon Necro-Armor, AND, if at any time you don't have at least 1 Level Armor Dragon in your Graveyard, Necro is removed from play. I'm pretty sure that if they do legalize them, because they are so powerful they'll be Limited, so you have to keep Level in the Graveyard. Secondly, the only real requirement for a monster, spell, or trap to be legalized is that a. it has correct OCG and is original, and b. it can be stopped/destroyed. Now you're probably wondering how this thing can be stopped. That's where two other cards I invented just for the purpose of stopping these two should they be legalized and fall into the hands of someone I Dueled. They'd be all excited and think they had me pown'd and I'd just do the whole "all knowing laugh" and the whole "You pitiful fool." Then WHAM! "I designed those cards...Just like I designed this combo! I activate my Trap Card "Deadly Reflections," (Basically when a Spell Trap or Monster effect used by your opponent inflicts damage to you, they take the same damage too.) and then I activate my Quick-Play Spell Card "The Blessed Martyr." (Basically, once again, when an effect used by your opponent inflicts damage to you, Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field to negate the damage, and increase your Life Points by half of the damage that would be inflicted.) Plus my Continuous Trap Warrior Cannon allows me to by paying 1000 Life Points for each turn I use it, select a Warrior-Type Monster in Attack Position on my side of the field (more than one if I wish and I don't have to pay LP for each one, just each turn, and only if I use it.) and select one monster my opponent controls and decrease its ATK and DEF by half of my Warrior's ATK. And yes, it's permanent. They can still bring it up with more Level Stars adding to their effects, or Equip Cards, but the points they lose don't come back. That stops them from being unstoppable both by their power AND effects, so see, I planned this out.

---

Field = field

1' date=' not one

 

When this card is sent to the Graveyard from your hand, Deck, or the Field, inflict Direct Damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of Level Stars on the field and in either player's Graveyard x100 points

 

^If Necro Armor Dragon were legalized, it would be banned shortly afterwards just because of this 1 sentence.

 

Very long effects which make it hard to find more ocg errors or determine the balance of these cards, but I suspect that both of them are rather overpowered.

 

Overall good ocg, effects are original but could be more balanced, pics are okay. Also, if these were to be released the effects would have to be shortened a lot so that we could actually read the effects -.-

 

8.2/10

 

Thanks for trying to help though, but no offense, I know what I'm doing, I'm only a "new guy" to this site, not to the business of card making.