zombiepirate? or zombiefishman?

[____pi____]

i made somee zombie ritule cards pleas point out ocg errors and stuff.

here it is.

and heres the link cus i got it off of google i searched cursed ship using google img.

http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.dermeister.nl/FH/pics/Ghostship.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.dermeister.nl/FH/FH.html&usg=__GMlknR94IBqFVwDwAOqrj4WXugQ=&h=261&w=339&sz=29&hl=en&start=9&sig2=uE-ygmOXxY_zAKsvynCsUQ&um=1&tbnid=_FXFSfMLLn7laM:&tbnh=92&tbnw=119&ei=8vFPSfjTOouasAPzrPCTDQ&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dcursed%2Bship%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26sa%3DX

heres the link img zombie

http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.untameduniverse.net/portfolio/char/zombie_fish_dude05.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.untameduniverse.net/blog/2007/06/zombie-fish-dude.html&usg=__iixGPJ6grDwlXahm3JPMh8Zo3dk=&h=397&w=500&sz=71&hl=en&start=148&sig2=n8hMe53SGNFB8MdgSIxa1Q&tbnid=AUoKDx1VKXA-YM:&tbnh=103&tbnw=130&ei=q_VPSaqgBZ-0sQP6m7mHDQ&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dzombie%26start%3D140%26gbv%3D2%26ndsp%3D20%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26sa%3DN

[Kale]

its a good start, but learn to capitalize your words, the ones that need to be. there isnt much depth to the effects, so it isnt the best card ever. but it is better than some i have seen, trust me.

 

ill give it a 6/10. it needs improvements. ;)

 

best of luck-

 

~K

[____pi____]

its a good start' date=' but learn to capitalize your words, the ones that need to be. there isnt much depth to the effects, so it isnt the best card ever. but it is better than some i have seen, trust me.

 

ill give it a 6/10. it needs improvements. ;)

 

best of luck-

 

~K

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thx

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its a good start' date=' but learn to capitalize your words, the ones that need to be. there isnt much depth to the effects, so it isnt the best card ever. but it is better than some i have seen, trust me.

 

ill give it a 6/10. it needs improvements. ;)

 

best of luck-

 

~K

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also i have made cards with much more depth such as master necromancer.

[Kotaro]

the pics are a bit blurry but they are good

 

i have seen some spelling mistakes as well for both cards

 

combind - combined

ritule -ritual

equil - equal

grave yard - graveyard

 

there is some ocg errors in both cards as well but not bad errors

 

6/10

[____pi____]

the pics are a bit blurry but they are good

 

i have seen some spelling mistakes as well for both cards

 

combind - combined

ritule -ritual

equil - equal

grave yard - graveyard

 

there is some ocg errors in both cards as well but not bad errors

 

6/10

 

thanks i had a really hard time finding good images that was the best i could find also if you have a better pic that fits the theme pleas send it to me

[legendhiro]

they definitely have potential, like all of your stuff that i've seen. only 7/10 so far though.