____pi____ Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://imagecache2.allposters.com/images/pic/57/042_3-1~Sorcerer-Posters.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.eurotrib.com/story/2007/3/26/122433/941&usg=__8NngfX7iLITM-nrPrWtSnIFoZ5A=&h=425&w=331&sz=46&hl=en&start=9&sig2=ucw8dCNFYi1GVFhJpzgapQ&tbnid=ICuNdDwiqtA6rM:&tbnh=126&tbnw=98&ei=mmFQSemwG4yGsAPcxOiFDQ&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsorcerer%26gbv%3D2%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26sa%3DG this is the amature necromancer's effect:When this card is destroyed you can special summon one zombie type monster from your hand or deck with an attack equal to or less than the attack of this card. when this card is special summond from the graveyard special summon one zombie monster from your hand, deck, or graveyard by paying half your life points.http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://images.epilogue.net/users/jhoneil/necromancer.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.epilogue.net/cgi/database/art/view.pl%3Fid%3D12105&usg=__HMcgqB-2ZpQ438tWn8gxHY_rGho=&h=688&w=550&sz=49&hl=en&start=3&sig2=9GhDU57wMBBUoCZng7Ukcw&um=1&tbnid=f5fC1YNptduK8M:&tbnh=139&tbnw=111&ei=s2JQSbHXJ4e4sAOrkNGXDQ&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dnecromancer%26um%3D1%26hl%3Den%26safe%3Doff%26rls%3Dcom.microsoft:en-us:IE-SearchBox%26rlz%3D1I7ADBR%26sa%3DNmaster necromanceres effect:This card cannot be normal summond or set this card cannot be special summond exept by tributing one "amature necromancer" from your hand and removeing it from play. when this card is summond destroy all monsters on your opponents feild, then your opponent special summons five 'ded body" tokens (DARK/Zombie-Type/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0)when this card destroyes a monster as a result of battle special summon that monster to your side of the feild it loses 300 ATK and DEF.ok pleas point out ocg errors and spelling erreors :lol: pleas give balancing tips and rate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gogeta™ Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 You missed spelled dead (you spelled it ded). Always capitalize the first letter in the card name, and the first letter in the card text after every period. There alot of errors that need fixing. Overall I'd rate 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____pi____ Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 You missed spelled dead (you spelled it ded). Always capitalize the first letter in the card name' date=' and the first letter in the card text after every period. There alot of errors that need fixing. Overall I'd rate 5/10[/quote'] thanks for the tips if i fixed those would you give a 6/10?:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 they aren't terrible, but not great. i guess i should say that they need work. 6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____pi____ Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 they aren't terrible' date=' but not great. i guess i should say that they need work. 6/10.[/quote']thx what could i do to inprove?:?ZOMBIES!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKaiser55 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 You spelt removing and dead wrong. You spelt them Removeing and Ded. These could use work.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Zombie - typeZombieWhen this card is Special SummonedGraveyardNormal SummonedSetthere are more but im lazy so... yeathe master should have more atk... and you should only take controll of the monster for 1 turn then it becomes removed from play... 7/10 you can work on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
____pi____ Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Zombie - typeZombieWhen this card is Special SummonedGraveyardNormal SummonedSetthere are more but im lazy so... yeathe master should have more atk... and you should only take controll of the monster for 1 turn then it becomes removed from play... 7/10 you can work on it.i feed your bunny a carrot> <]]]]]= Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Life Points field (spelled feild) removing from play 1 "Amateur Necromancer" in your hand Force_flex got the rest.______________________________________ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 they aren't terrible' date=' but not great. i guess i should say that they need work. 6/10.[/quote']thx what could i do to inprove?:?ZOMBIES!!!!!! i just think they're kind cliche zombie with the revive and the special summon and what not. give them something to set them apart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Life Points field (spelled feild) removing from play 1 "Amateur Necromancer" in your hand Force_flex got the rest.______________________________________ 7/10oh my god... did i just get somewhat of a compliment from DeMeNTeD!?!? kick me i must be dreaming good cards again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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