This is my Fiend-Type Monster Card!!

[kingdom01]

 

here is the description:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying half of your Life Points and Tributing 3 DARK Attribute Fiend-Type monsters you control. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, toss a coin:

If Heads: Each time a monster is summoned, increase your Life Points by 500 and inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

If Tails:When this card destroys a monster in Defense Position in battle, destroy all other Defense Position monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the combined total of the destroyed monsters ATK halved.

This card is unaffected by Trapand Spell cards. While this card is on your field, you must pay 800 LP each Standly Phase, if you don't pay, this card is destroyed and it's removed from play.

 

 

The IMG credit goes to Deviantart

[Gogeta™]

There's a lot of OCG errors that I can spot. The ATK and DEF are too high, maybe this could be a 9 Star Level 9 monster. There needs to be more draw backs to the card effect it's to powerful in the controllers favor. Go back and rework the effect, but until then 4/10 :)

[kingdom01]

well to summon it there is many conditions, and that's what make it a powerfull card, its effects like that destiny hero plasma, right? and i can't spot any OCG error, so could u tell me where are they ?

[Flavour]

Hey buddy! Remember me?

 

So, on topic your new card...

 

1.OCG Errors.

Yours:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special summoned by paying half of your LP and tributing 3 DARK attribut Fiend-Type monsters you control. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, toss a coin, if it is face then each time a monster in Summoned you gain 500 LP and your opponent loses 500 LP. If it is tail then when this card destroys a monster by battle, all the monsters your opponent controls are destroyed and your opponent loses LP equal to the half of their combined ATK. This card is not affected by Trap, Spell cards and Monster effects.

 

Mine:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by paying half of your Life Points and Tributing 3 DARK Attribute Fiend-Type monsters you control. When this card is successfully Special Summoned, toss a coin:

If Heads: Each time a monster is summoned, increase your Life Points by 500 and inflict 500 damage to your opponent.

If Tails:When this card destroys a monster in battle, destroy all monsters your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the combined total of the destroyed monsters ATK halved.

This card is unaffected by Trap, Spell cards and Monster effects.

 

Fixed.

 

2nd:OP/UP

Way overpowered.The ATK and DEF is to high, and the effect is unfair. You need to take away some effects (Eg. The one that destroys their monsters and deals damage to your opponent) and add some negative ones (Eg. It's destroyed after 3 turns or something)

 

Nice pic, name, ok idea. I honestly don't think this is your best card ever.

 

Overall,4/10.

 

~Flavour

[kingdom01]

well thanks, i'll try to fix it :)

[kingdom01]

i made a change please check it out again and tell me what u think

[starwebs1]

oh boy.

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Name Should be: - not :!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[kingdom01]

please clearefy ur comment because it's not clear at all, and the card is not based in its name, so i think u must reconsider

[Sigma]

I see a whole bunch of OCG errors in there. The effect is to OP'ed, also, you need IMG Credit. 4/10