kinho Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighthawk14 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Not the Best, but I have seen a lot worse I give you a........... 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 6.8/10. Errors in some places. some things need to be spaced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Take out the direct attack effect. Add a space after loses, change to DARK. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jinkotsu Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 pretty good insurance card if you dont want to be destroyed, but it could be better 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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