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My First Dark Synchro

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Blitzkrieg98 Newbie

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Oooh... A Dark Synchro Monster. I know quite the thing or two of these amicable beings, but to be honest, this is my first review on a Dark Synchro Monster. I can spot a number of errors, so consider me here to help.

 

Ratings:

 

Image Work: 6.5/10 (I do find that most of the errors found on this card is the work on the image itself. Did you only go halfway through the tutorials? The Negative Levels look...somewhat correct, though maybe you should position them a little further to the left and perhaps use the official Negative Level image [ http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Negative_Level ]... The coloring of the Attribute image and the Effect Box borders are what really bother me. The DARK Attribute image is supposed to stay the same way throughout every monster type. The effect box's border also stays the same color, orange. The inside of the effect box is okay,though it should be a little lighter and the card's name should have been omitted from being colored...)

 

Synchro Material Monsters: 7.5/10 (Finally onto the card's traits. I can see where you are going, but with Dark Synchro Monsters, the arrangement is different and the plus sign [+] is replaced with a minus sign [-]. Here is an example: "1 or more non-Tuner monsters - 1 Dark Tuner". Also, you need to capitalize! Tuner is capitalized and Dark Tuner, capitalized.)

 

Effect: 8.0/10 (Hmm... I do like the effect where it will indeed allow you to draw 2 cards, but the ATK gain on an already-powerful monster is...troublesome. The ability to activate that effect on either player's turn is crippling, in contrast to "Injection Fairy Lily", a monster who is easily Summoned, yet the effect gives balance by having low ATK and the 2000 Life Point cost, limiting options for BOTH players. "Drusty Dragon" makes it so only the opponent feels the prejudiced sting of overkill, only making it so your Level 4 monsters cannot attack. My suggestion is to replace the effect with this one: "If this card is in Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, first, you can and must attack all monsters your opponent controls once each with this card. If this card attacked, you cannot attack with any other monsters you control until the end of the Battle Phase." This will give the card power and give you options too; whether you should attack with this card or not. Also, I suggest the use of punishment should this card be destroyed too easily, you will see below.)

 

Grammar: 8.25/10 (The card's grammar is all right, but you should add punctuation and capitalization...)

 

With the options given to you, this card will have the following effect:

 

1 or more non-Tuner monsters - I Dark Tuner

If this card is in Attack Position at the beginning of your Battle Phase, first, you can and must attack all monsters your opponent controls once each with this card. If this card attacked, you cannot attack with any other monsters you control until the end of the Battle Phase. When this card is sent from the field or the Extra Deck to the Graveyard by a card effect, draw 2 cards and your opponent discard's 2 random cards.

 

Overall: 7.75 (Despite the certain flaws present, it is nice to see and critique a Dark Synchro Monster at last. Happy editing...)

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