My NEW Akatsuki Cards

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Pein

Konan

Deidara

Hidan

Itachi

Kakuzu

Kisame

Sasori

Zetsu

 

 

well these are the NEW akatsuki cards. Please dont flam or Hate. Im still new at this so im still learning.

 

yet again all my images i get are from google.

[Shrekstasy]

-That's not how you work a ritual.

-Stay away from using fake-types.

-How is Pein FIRE?

Pein is overpowered. Remove 2 of his 3 effects.

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honestly i dont care how you work a ritual.

fake types dont concern me

pein can be a number of things because of his eye ability

and no he isnt overpowered he just has a entry effect. and a spell blocker liek jinzo does

 

remember these are (HIGH) level cards. like gate guardian or blue eyes or black skull dragon. their attack and defence may not be much but their effects make up for it.

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bumpify

[Damiano Tosē]

dey r still good no matta wat nice job wigggles 9/10

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thank you very much

[Damiano Tosē]

your welcome

[jabberwock]

these are nice i would just work on OCG

these are the best pics ive seen for these kind of cards

7/10

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thank you very much

[Damiano Tosē]

do what you gotta do ull great evrything settled

[kuriboh333x2]

I like the cards in general, and even though I play yugioh and that's not how a ritual works, I'm not going to nag about it. 9/10

[Damiano Tosē]

same here

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honestly i believe taht these cards are from the imagination so i think that rituals and fake-type cards can be acceptable. in any form.

[Xm0nkeyxbutt]

well i'm not hatin on the cards but this site is for making "YUGIOH" cards. there are rules and outlines to making good cards. if you didn't want to follow the ritual summon format than you should've just made them regular effect cards. i'm fine with fake types but bombing on how you don't care about how rituals work is like saying you don't care how the game works. once again i'm not hatin on the cards. they're quite good for a newbie. just respect the game enough to follow it's original format. few OCG errors and pein IS a lil ovp'd. but all in all 9/10 for the cards.

[Yondaime]

idk...i dont like that they're rituals so...6/10

[Shrekstasy]

honestly i dont care how you work a ritual.

fake types dont concern me

pein can be a number of things because of his eye ability

and no he isnt overpowered he just has a entry effect. and a spell blocker liek jinzo does

 

remember these are (HIGH) level cards. like gate guardian or blue eyes or black skull dragon. their attack and defence may not be much but their effects make up for it.

 

Make it "his ring and 4 Monster Cards" then.

[.Gideon.]

let me tell u something, if you became a REAL card maker, u would ruin the entire game ..

 

Read some real yugioh ritual cards and learn how to write down the effects in the right way

also dont use fake types

bad pics

 

I hate to say but i cannot give more than 1/10

keep workin on your cards : )

[monkeypooop]

10/10 make the spell ritual

[Kesshi]

Im a Super Fan of the Akatsuki in general so to see cards like those idk what to think about them. Still, i like the pic very good ones, the effects and being a ritual not so much. Im new at making cards... so i know how ya fell 7/10..

 

Suggestion: I would suggest make them effect cards, because of the effect of bringing their partner into play when they are summoned..

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Replace "Akatsuki / Rogue Ninja" with "Warrior".

 

Try reading the OCG thread to improve upon that.

[Damiano Tosē]

u still doing good

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well im not really one to say mean things but, i dont care for fake types, im not here to make "REAL" cards.

 

I do believe my OCG still needs work but everything else is fine, i do admit after looking at pein, i should of lowered his effect a little.

 

Demented, you are a great card maker, i love most cards that you make, but im not in concern with fake types. i do plan on releasing cards in better format in the future but as of now the fake type doesnt concern me.

[~UNHOLY_PHOENIX~]

So, bad OCG, some of the pics aren't great, and i see a fake type issue.

 

I hear what you're saying but maybe just take out "Rogue Ninja" if you like fakes?? Akatsuki is enough, if you ask me.

 

Also, i don't see a reason for all of them to be rituals; it really doesn't make much sense, and those aren't how Ritual Monsters are made to be summoned. How about, for those that should be rituals, you just make one ritual card (like with Demise and Ruin cards) that can summon any monster with "Akatsuki" in it's name.

 

until then 3/10

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well i have remade them into effect monster cards, and i have made them just akatsuki cards.

 

the OCG ill work on later.

 

here is a preview of what ive done

 

[~ Chidori-Kun]

well i have remade them into effect monster cards' date=' and i have made them just akatsuki cards.

 

the OCG ill work on later.

 

here is a preview of what ive done

 

[img']http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/7959/206666de9.jpg[/img]

 

Correct Everything:

 

Name: Akatsuki Member - Itachi

Level: 8

Type: Warrior

Effect: When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Akatsuki Member - Kisame" from your hand. Once per turn, select 1 monster on the field. The selected monster cannot attack. Inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points during the End Phase of your turn.