kaching335 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 plz rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 This needs to be an Effect monster, Undead is not a type and neither is Skeleton. Try Zombie. Also, change the effect, it's overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Navras Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Ummm, picture could use just a little bit of work, something just a tad bit brighter, b ut other than that, Its good as is. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alordzynix Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 This needs to be an Effect monster' date=' Undead is not a type and neither is Skeleton. Try Zombie. Also, change the effect, it's overpowered.[/quote']Skeleton isn't a type indeed but he never said it was, Skeleton can be an Archtype like Lightsworn. Than it also woudn't be overpowered because for as far as I know Skeleton King is the only monster with Skeleon in its name. I like the picture but like stated before it needs to be an Effect monster and your card grammar isn't good either, if Skeleton is an Archtype it needs to be: "Skeleton" monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 it has an effect, (with bad OCG) and it needs to be the colour ORange (to symbolize effect) also fake type (make it zombie or fiend) name is simple (like Zargabund the Dead king :S) BUT, balanced ATK and DEF. i understand waht this card can be, make it take contorol of all zombie type monsters,- although this effect is already used, madd something else to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sdfsdfa Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Give it an effect because it is boring. No sutch Type pleaz use a real type. Pic needs work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Change to Effect Monster, good pic, add a better effect, "Skeleton" monsters. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 eh...i just don't like this. sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Normal monsters with effects = No. Needs to be an effect monster. Maybe put in a more interesting effect. Pic is a little used too. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabberwock Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 yeah change it to tan effect monster thats the biggest thing for meeveryone else seemed to be quick at finding its faults4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 to really judge it fairly we need to see some of these skeletons that you refer to in its text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Make it a Zombie-Type and give it an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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