Soul Protector, a new card, FIX

[.Gideon.]

I made this card and I know there are some OCG issues with it so I need ur feedbacks

 

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Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned, put 3 Sacred Counters on it. When you would take a battle damage, you can remove 1 Sacred Counter from this card to reduce the damage you would take to 0. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove 2 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard from play to put 1 Sacred Counter on this card. This card is unaffected by Spell Cards.

 

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The bold part needs to be corrected,

I will also appreciate your comments & rates for the card ^^

there is a wording in the pic I know, I should change to lvl 7, I didnt finish the card yet I'll work on the border and the image itself but i only posted it for u to fix any errors, ^

 

IMG from google,

[Valhalla God Odin]

Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned' date=' put 3 Sacred Counters on it. [b']When you would take a battle damage, you can remove 1 Sacred Counter from this card to reduce the damage you would take to 0[/b]. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove 2 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard from play to put 1 Sacred Counter on this card. This card is unaffected by Spell Cards.

 

heres how i would word it:

During either player's turn, if you take any Battle Damage, you can remove 1 Sacred Counter from this card to reduce the damage to 0.

 

you should of crop off the writing and the black edges of the image.

7/10

[Spire]

The image and border don't look to good, ou could crop them in paint. But good OCG. Effect is fine in my opinion, 8.2/10.

[.Gideon.]

thnx guys

more comments are more than welcomed !

[.Gideon.]

bump bump

 

comments + fix

[Chevalier]

Take away the image's border. Nao.

[Professor Cobra]

When you receive Battle Damage, good pic, take out the last effect, it doesn't fit, lower DEF to 2000, raise ATK to 2200, lettering in the corner, reduce the Battle Damage to 0. 7/10

[.Gideon.]

I said Im not finished with this card yet, i'll take out the border & the wording later after I fix the ocg there.

 

thnx alot guys :)

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. When this card is Summoned' date=' [b']place[/b] 3 Sacred Counters on it. When you would take a Battle Damage, you can remove 1 Sacred Counter from this card to reduce the damage you would take to 0. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can remove 2 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard from play to place 1 Sacred Counter on this card. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell Cards.

 

you should of crop off the writing and the black edges of the image.

7/10

 

Fixed.

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The last effect looks like it was just thrown in for the hec of it. :neutral:

[Jace Beleren]

nice card

8/10

keep it up