yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Ok i've finally finished my set Undead Army. so rate comment and tell me what you think. i think the OCG is ok. Monsters: Avengefull Warrior Card Lore:This card cannot Attack unless you tribute 1 Level 1 Zombie-Type monster. When this card Destroys a monster by battle you can Special Summon 1 Undead Army Token (Zombie-Type/DARK/1 Star/ATK 0/DEF 0) in ATK position on your side of the Field. Card Lore:This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it treated as an Effect Monster with the following effect:● Once per turn by removing 4 "Undead Counter's" from a monster you can Special Summon 1 Zombie-Type monster from your hand. Card Lore:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Zombie-Type monsters. This cards ATK is the Same as the number of "Undead Counters" on the Field x 1000. Once per turn by removing 5 Zombie-Type monsters from play you can destroy all cards on your opponent's side of the field. Card Lore:Once every Standby Phase you can place 1 "Undead Counter" on 1 monster on you opponent's side of the field. When there are 5 "Undead Counters" on a monster destroy that monster. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard detsroy all monsters that have "Undead Counters" on them. Card Lore:Once per turn during your Standby Phase you can draw 1 card. If it is aMonster: Place 1 "Undead Counter" on 1 monster on the field.Spell: Increase your LP by 500 points.Trap: You take 300 LP of Damage. Synchro monsters: Spells: Traps: All images were found on deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 decent cards for a newbie im impressed, keep it up, also i dont like B'n'W pictures some effects are short and simple, expand a little, show mroe complication Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bittersweet88 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 I like the theme, but some of the cards seem overpowered and others pointless. Soul takers effect especially seems pointless. I wouldnt bother my ass putting five counters on a monster to kill it, I would just spread the counters over all the opponents monsters and then dare them to "destroy" my monster. not by battle, just destroy. it seems pretty sick. Also, a counter is generated every turn, yours and your opponents. I thought I would give some constructive criticism. minus the odd over powered card and that effect I mentioned. I really like your deck. Its looking really nice and the way it works is a fun concept. Pictures are awesome toop.s. I think the simple effects are better :pThey are easier on the eyes and less rules querying occurs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kingdom01 Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 pretty good job for a new member, i loved the pics and the names but i think if i were in ur place i could of called them Undead Soldier... instead but it's fine, and ur OCG is good, i like it, may be few mistakes but it's still great, keep up the good work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx Posted December 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 I'm gonna use your advice about spoutaker Bittersweet88. thnx everyone. this really took effort to make. i really appreciate it.yujiooh can you explain to me exactly which cards have simple effects. tnx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 i got an idea for a new synchro card a little while after i poated this so..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeq313 Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Dude sweet u should check out my set....dark galaxy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yu-gi-oh cardmaker xx Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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