Arkaid The Arbiter

[Jace Beleren]

this my new monster card

 

Arkaid The Arbiter

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 2 Spell Cards from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by 2000 untill your opponent's next End Phase. When this card destroys a monster, Draw 1 card.

 

plz rate and comment

 

the img from google

[.Gideon.]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can discard 2 Spell Cards from your hand to increase the ATK of this card by 2000 [untill your opponent's next End Phase]. When this card destroys a monster, Draw 1 card.

 

The way it is right now is clearly overpowered, u should put a limit for the ATK increasement ( until .... )

nice card though, u can be more creative with it ^^

also take out the wording in the right corner

 

8/10

[Jace Beleren]

ok fixed

 

thanx 4 your comment

 

any other comments?

[James89]

Lose two spell cards to draw one card? The means outweigh the ends imo

[Jace Beleren]

u should read the effect more closely plz

[.Gideon.]

no dude remove the brackets, I put them just to show u an example

u can chose the phase & the turn u'd like the effect to last, its your card afterall ^^

 

and James: u lose 2 spells to INCREASE THE ATK OF THIS CARD BY 2000 . the drawing part is active all the time.

[Jace Beleren]

now i see ok

fixed

thanx

 

any other comment?

[James89]

Well yea of course its there all the time. But how many times is a 1000 atk monster going to have the chance to destroy another monster? Can think of too many. If you have a full 6 card hand, this card takes away half of it in order for it to be useful. And considering you need to have 3 lights in the grave, I doubt you do have a full 6 card hand when you get the chance to summon it. I think discarding any two cards makes this card a powerhouse. Two spells is too costly imo, seeing as how you dont put spells in your deck just to chuck them.

 

Just my 2 cents though.

[Jace Beleren]

any other coment?

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing 3 LIGHT monsters in your Graveyard from play. Once per turn' date=' during your Main Phase, you can discard 2 Spell Cards from your hand to increase [b']this card's ATK[/b] by 2000 until the End Phase of your opponent's next turn. When this card destroys a monster by battle, draw 1 card.

 

The way it is right now is clearly overpowered, u should put a limit for the ATK increasement ( until .... )

nice card though, u can be more creative with it ^^

also take out the wording in the right corner

 

8/10

 

Fixed. ;)

[Professor Cobra]

This card can only be Special Summoned by... good pic, take out [, change to until your opponent's next..., change Level to 4, ATK to 1500, DEF to 1500. 7/10

[Jace Beleren]

thanx 4 your comments

fixed

any other comments?