SwineRider Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 [align=center]Let´s take a look at my new cards. I think positive about them. Maybe a little ocg error at the Spell card. Maybe you want to fix it? Thanks for watching^^ #1 Effect: This card can only be Advanced Summoned, if there`s a Field Spell card face-up on the field. If there`s no Field Spell card on the field, this card is destroyed in the End Phase. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you may select 1 face-up card on the top of your opponents deck and remove it from play. #2 Effect: I think the letters are big enough=P^^[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 Field Spell Card this card is destroyed = destroy this card (<--Sounds better to me, but you don't have to change that) may = can Deck every = each___________________________________ 2nd card reminds me of "Convulsion of Nature". Only you don't turn around your deck... just your opponent does. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DOOMSaveMaster88 Posted December 27, 2008 Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 That Card is horrible it is poorly worded and its effect only works with convolution of nature. Plus you have a horrible summoning condition. You also lack and form of punctuational skills as that card has none.i just noticed you should never say turned around that means that they draw face down cards you should say is played upside down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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