schattenwolf Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Hello, I'm creating a Set of Cards with Characters and Objects of the Anime "Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle". You only get to see something by clicking "Click to View" if there is something writen in brackets after the card's name. (Finished) means, the card should be without any OCG errors and shouldn't need to get corrected. But if you find an error on a (Finished) card, please tell me. (New) means, the card was created recently and may still have some OCG, picture or balance errors. Please tell me if you find any errors. Would be nice to get some ratings, feedbacks or critiques. [center][img]http://s10b.directupload.net/images/user/090102/7wioeefn.png[/img][/center][img] [spoiler=TRCE-EN000 Gathering the Feathers][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN001 Sakura [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img255.imageshack.us/img255/9236/209278dc0.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be destroyed or removed from field by the effect of your opponent's Spell, Trap of Monster Card. This card cannot declare battle. Your opponent takes no damage from a battle involving this card. If "Syaroan", "Fay" or "Kurogane" is face-up on your field, this card cannot be selected as an attack target.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/gallery.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN002 Syaoran [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/255/209278sp3.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]If "Sakura" is face-up on your field, this cards ATK is increased by 300. If "Sakura" is selected as an attack target on your field, you can Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position from your hand.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/gallery.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN003 Fay [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/9402/209278oa3.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you can activate Quick-Play Spell Cards from your hand during your opponent's turn. If this card is destroyed, you can discard 1 Quick-Play Spell Card from your hand to negate the destruction of this card.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/gallery.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN004 Kurogane [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img126.imageshack.us/img126/3346/209278zr9.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]Each time this card destroys a Monster Card by battle, decrease it's ATK by 300. Once per turn, during either player's turn, if this monster's ATK is 2500 or more, you can negate the effect of a card that destroys this card, or negate the attack of a monster with higher ATK than this card, only if "Kurogane" is this monster's attack target. If this card's ATK is 2000 or more, your opponent takes no Battle Damage from a battle involving this card.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/gallery.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN005 Winged Sakura][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN006 Syaoran on Fire][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN007 Fay D. Flourite [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img356.imageshack.us/img356/3721/209278wb4.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]This card's name is also treated as "Fay". Each time either player activates a Quick-Play Spell Card, place 1 Spell Counter on this card. Remove 2 Spell Counters from this card to activate a Quick-Play Spell Card from your Graveyard. This effect can be used during either player's turn. If a Quick-Play Spell Card is activated using this effect, remove the Quick-Play Spell Card from play when it is removed from field.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://kaoru-chan.deviantart.com/art/mise-eire-73977211[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN008 Unbound Kurogane][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN009 Feather of Memory [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/8190/209278ic6.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]Only "Sakura" can be equipped with this card. Increase the ATK and DEF of the monster equipped with this card by 1000. If there are at least 2 "Feather of Memory" equipped on the same monster, negate the equipped monster's effect. If there are at least 3 "Feather of Memory" equipped on the same monster, the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle or by a Spell, Trap or Monster Card's effect.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://images.google.de/imgres?imgurl=http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n248/MedliSage/Tsubasa%2520Chronicle/Feather.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.imeem.com/groups/x3rkXoah/blogs/2007/12/19/yS-xWxPX/syaoran_most_favourite_character&usg=__q9S_DKatGiplR5fRkTprodDEIvk=&h=200&w=226&sz=56&hl=de&start=20&tbnid=SEr5t-aJCEtePM:&tbnh=96&tbnw=108&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dsakura%2Bretrieving%2Bfeather%26start%3D18%26gbv%3D2%26ndsp%3D18%26hl%3Dde%26sa%3DN[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN010 Sword of Fire][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN011 Staff of Magic][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN012 Ginryu, Silver Dragon][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN013 Yukito][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN014 Toya][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN015 Yuko Ichihara][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN016 Tomoyo][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN017 Fei Wong Reed][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN018 Clow Reed][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN019 Syaoran's Clone][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN020 World - Clow Country][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN021 World - Celes Country [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/9486/209278gg0.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]When this card is activated, remove each "Fay" on the field from play. If this card is removed from field, Special Summon each "Fay" which is removed from play on it's owner's field. The activation and effects of Spell Cards cannot be negated. Increase the ATK of each Spellcaster-Type Monster on the field by 500.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://anime.akichigo.org/tsubasa/3.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN022 World - Piffle Country][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN023 World - Country Built on Sand][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN024 World - Land of Jade][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN025 World - Land of Outo][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN026 World - Oasis of Time [color=red](New)[/color]][center][img]http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/897/209278xe1.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]As long as this card remains face-up on the field, the Phases are ordered different. First is Battle Phase. Second is Main Phase. Third is Draw Phase. Fourth is Main Phase 2. Fifth is Standby Phase. Sixth is End Phase. When this card is removed from field, place it in your deck, then shuffle your deck.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://anime.akichigo.org/tsubasa/8.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN027 Mokona Modoki (Soel) [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/8835/209278hs3.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If your opponent attacks this face-down monster, you gain 1000 Life Points. Each time "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" is selected as an attack target by 1 of your opponent's monsters, place 1 Mokona Counter on this card.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://mokona-san.deviantart.com/art/Mokona-66030552[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN028 Mokona Modoki (Larg) [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/3370/209278du0.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be destroyed by a Spell, Trap or Monster Card's effect. If your opponent selects this face-down card as a target of a card effect, your opponent takes 1000 Damage. Each time this card would be destroyed by a Spell, Trap or Monster Card's effect, place 1 Mokona Counter on this card.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://kazemachi.deviantart.com/art/black-mokona-card-88928226[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN029 Mokona][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN030 Mokona Modoki Resonance [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/3330/209278ji3.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]You can only activate this card if "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" and "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" are face-up on your field. Remove all Mokona Counters from your field and select cards on your opponent's field and your opponent's hand equal to the number of removed Mokona Counters. Remove the selected cards from play.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://memories-never-fade.deviantart.com/art/Mokona-Modoki-Larg-and-Soel-73708950[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN031 Mokona Modoki Transportation [color=red](New)[/color]][center][img]http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/7410/209278hq9.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]This card can only be activated if at least 1 "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" and 1 "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" are on your field, in your hand, Deck or Graveyard or removed from play. Select 1 "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" on your field, in your hand, Deck or Graveyard or removed from play. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" is on your field, select 1 Spell or Trap Card from your field. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" is in your hand, select 1 Spell or Trap Card from your hand. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" is in your Deck, select 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Deck. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" is in your Graveyard, select 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Graveyard. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Soel)" is removed from play, select 1 Spell or Trap Card removed from play. Then select 1 "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" on your field, in your hand, Deck or Graveyard or removed from play. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" is on your field, Set the selected Spell or Trap Card on your field. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" is in your hand, add the selected Spell or Trap Card in your hand. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" is in your Deck, add the selected Spell or Trap card in your Deck, then shuffle your Deck. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" is in your Graveyard, send the selected Spell or Trap Card to the Graveyard. If the selected "Mokona Modoki (Larg)" is removed from play, remove the selected Spell or Trap Card from play.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]CLAMP - I took the picture directly from one of the episodes.[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN032 Sakura's Wings][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN033 Fay's World Travel Magic [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/4222/209278qb8.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]You can only activate this card if "Fay" is face-up on your field or in your hand. Remove 1 "Fay" from your field or your hand from play. During your next Standby Phase, you can activate one of the following effects. - Special Summon the monster which is removed from play by this card's effect in face-up Attack or Defense Position. - Place the monster which is removed from play by this card's effect in your Deck, than shuffle your Deck. - Add the monster which is removed by this card's effect to your hand. - If the monster which is removed from play by this card's effect is "Fay D. Flourite", you can place it on your Extra Deck.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/screenshots.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN034 Yukito's Circle of Magic [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/2355/209278ar1.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]You can only activate this card if "Yukito" is face-up on your field. Remove 1 "Sakura" and 1 "Syaoran" from your hand, your deck, your field or your Graveyard from play. During your 2nd Standby Phase after this card was activated, Special Summon both monsters removed from play by this card's effect in face-up Attack or Defense Position.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/screenshots.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN035 Drawn to Another World [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/6590/209278tl0.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]You can only activate this card during either player's Battle Phase, if a monster declared an attack. After Damage Calculation, remove the Monster Card which attacked from play. During your opponent's 2nd End Phase after you activated this card's effect, Special Summon the monster removed by this card's effect on your field in face-up Attack or Defense Position. Decrease the ATK and DEF of the monster Special Summoned by this card's effect by 500.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://anime.akichigo.org/tsubasa/3.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN036 Arrival in a New World [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img240.imageshack.us/img240/9936/209278us3.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]Each time a monster which is removed from play is Special Summoned on your field, place 1 Arrival Counter on this card. The Special Summoned monster cannot be destroyed during the turn it was Summoned. Remove 3 Arrival Counters from this card to select 1 "World" Field Spell Card from your deck or your Graveyard and activate it. Then shuffle your deck, if you selected from your deck.[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://anime.akichigo.org/tsubasa/3.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN037 Travelling with Mokona][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN038 Yuko's Trades][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN039 Mystery of the Lost Children][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN040 Kudan!][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN041 Rayearth - Kudan of Fire][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN042 Selece - Kudan of Battle][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN043 Windam - Kudan of Air][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN044 Protection Barrier][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN045 Fay's Protection Magic][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN046 Never-Ending Love [color=green](Finished)[/color]][center][img]http://img176.imageshack.us/img176/8305/209278xb6.jpg [/img][/center][img][spoiler=Effect]This card can only be activated if "Sakura" and "Syaoran" are face-up on your field. "Sakura" and "Syaoran" cannot be destroyed by battle or by a Spell, Trap or Monster Card's effect. You take no Damage from a battle involving "Sakura" or "Syaoran".[/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit]http://trc.soliloqui.com/gallery.php[/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN047 Imitated Feather][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN048 Fay and Kurogane - Teamwork][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN049 Fay's Tatoo][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] [spoiler=TRCE-EN050 Fei Wong Reed's Mirror][align=center][/align][spoiler=Effect][/spoiler][spoiler=Image Credit][/spoiler][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blanka_uwoo Posted December 29, 2008 Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 AWESOME WORK!TSUBASA IS GREAT!! And SAKURA CARD CAPTORS TOOTHE CARDS ARE BALANCED, THE PICS ARE GOOD AND GOOD OCG10/10!!!!! ! ! ! ! ! Perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted December 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2008 Thank you very much for this positive feedback. It's nice that you like my cards, but I also need critique so I can get better at making cards. You say my cards are perfect, but I think there are much things I could make better, if someone could tell me which things are wrong. I noticed myself that I made some mistakes with the first letter of some words (card/Card, as an example) and I'll correct that next time I work on the cards. Right now, there are just 6 cards and I plan to make at least 20 or much more of them (at least I hope that I won't give up my plan). Would be nice if some others would write a feedback, need some critiques. (Ah, and one question: Must the tuner monster which is used to special summon a synchro monster be from the same type as the synchro monster? I read something like that, but I'm not sure if it's right how it was wrote) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blanka_uwoo Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 OK, the OCG needs some tunning (some, no more) example the Sakura card.I don't know a syncro card (I don't see 1 never in my life) what is a syncro????? You need remove the borders of pics (Mokona and Never Ending Love)Good Luck and don't give up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Thanks, thats much more usefull than a "everything is perfect" post ;) Here you can look what synchro monsters are: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Synchro_Monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Rival Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Sakura: This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of your opponent's cards. This card cannot declare battle. Neither player takes damage from a battle involving this card. If "Syaoran" is face-up on your field, this card cannot be selected as an attack target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Thanks for the help, Eternal Rival ^^ (sorry, just now noticed that only "Monster/Trap/Spell Card" is with a Cap C on Card, I'll rechange it again later) Would also be nice to read what you think of my cards. Does anyone know how to make the "multiple choice effect" - symbol? Added "Feather of Memory" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Rival Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Actually, you don't need to capitilize the word "Card". If you look at many popular IRL cards, like Spirit Reaper, card shows up without capitilization, so you may want to change that. On the card, Syaoran, it states, "If Sakura is selected as an attack target you can Special Summon this card." Where can you Special Summon the card from, your hand? your Deck? your Graveyard? Never-Ending Love: This card can only be activated if you have a face-up "Sakura" and "Syaoran" on your field. "Sakura" and "Syaoran" cannot be destroyed by the effect of a card and cannot attack or be selected as attack targets. Kurogane: If this card destroys a monster by battle, decrease this card's ATK by 300. Once per turn, during either player's turn, if this monster has 2500 or more ATK, it can negate the effective of a card that destroys this card, or negate the attack of a monster that has higher ATK than this card. If this card has 2000 or more ATK, neither players take Battle Damage from a battle involving this card. I think I worded Kurogane correctly. If I didn't, I don't think there really is an official way to word it as I have not heard of another card like it. Keep up the good work on cards, and reread some of them and compare them to real cards. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Thank you very much for your help (does it sound stupid, if I thank u again and again? ^^') I often just try to get the effect of the cards as I imagine it with sentences I read on other cards. I never look if there's a simpler way to subscribe the effect, and that seems to be my bigest mistake. You used "neither player take Battle Damage from a battle involving this card" two times to correct me, but I meant on both cards (Kurogane and Sakura) just that my opponent won't get any Battle Damage from battles involving this cards on his life points (well, it's a little bit different on Sakura. Kurogane is able to destroy your opponents monster, but he can't make any damage on the opponents life points as long as he has more than 2000 ATK. Sakura would'nt even destroy a weaker Monster if your opponent would attack her with one with a weaker attack and also Sakura doesn't take damage on the opponent's life points). Could you (or anyone else) tell me how I have to write the sentences to differ "Battle Damage on the opponent's Life Points" and "any Battle Damage" which also includes destroying monsters (so like Waboku, just that it doesn't help you but helps your opponent). The word "Card" is capitalized also on "Spirit Reaper", as long as one of the card types is described ("Monster Card" "Spell Card" "Trap Card"). Thats also what I meant in my last post, that card types are te only cases to write card with a capitalized C. Sorry if anyone misunderstands what I write, my english isn't the best ^^' Edit: Just noticed that Waboku is writen different in English and German. On german, "Battle Damage" means both, damage on the life points as well as destroyed monsters. So if Waboku would be direct translated, it just says that you won't take any battle damage this turn. But now I saw that on the english version of the card also "Your monsters cannot be destroyed as a result of battle this turn." is part of the effect of Waboku, so I know now that german rules use "Battle Damage" otherwise than the english rules. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Rival Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Your opponent takes no battle damage from a battle involving this card.That should be the correct way, since I can't recall a card with a similar effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Tell me please if you find any mistakes on my new cards ^^ Also, I'm happy about any feedback from anyone, don't hold back writing one, you who read this sentence right now ;) I'm now realy sure that I'll make at least 20 (and I'm sure I will make more) TRCE cards ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimalFear Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 There allright they need some work but overall there pretty good, I would suggest maybe finding some better pics for a couple but other then that can't say too much, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 I changed now some of the pictures, maybe the new ones are better than the ones before.Thanks for your positive feedback and your rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eternal Rival Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Alright, I figured it's time I help you with another fix. Fay D. Flourite: This card's name is also treated as "Fay". Each time a Quick-Play Spell is activated, place 1 Spell Counter on this card. Remove 2 Spell Counters from this card to activate a Quick-Play Spell from your Graveyard. This effect can be used during either player's turn. If a Quick-Play Spell is activated using this effect, remove the Quick-Play Spell from play when it is removed from the field. Mokona Modoki (Soel): This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If your opponent attacks this facedown monster, you gain 1000 life points. Place 1 Mokona Counter on this card each time it is selected as an attack target by 1 of your opponent's monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted January 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Thanks again for your help, Eternal Rival ^^Your posts here are alway the most usefull ones :3 (doesn't mean that I'm not happy about others posting here o_o) I'll make some new cards soon. As always, I'm everytime happy about ratings, feedbacks and critiques ^^(If someone wants to, you can also post something about the card in my signature) Update: TRCE-EN015 World - Celes CountryTRCE-EN016 World - Time Would be nice to get some comments to my new cards ^^I'll make more cards soon, just right now the motivation lacks a little bit... Update: I think I'll cancel the Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle Edition... It looks like nobody is interested in this edition, so I don't feel like making any more cards of this set... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 7/10.. Havent watched the anime but these are decent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Thank you very much, thanks to your post I might get again motivation to create more of this cards ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Never heard of this show before. OCG looks acceptable. Most errors here probably aren't that noticeable. 8.5/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~/Coolio Prime\~ Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 This is how cards should be made. 8.2/10 B- As for the anime, I don't watch it due to most anime being horrible, but I remember this one. You did a very good job making the effects relative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Nice 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schattenwolf Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Thank you for the realy nice ratings and comments ^-^ I made now a new layout of the first post, hope you like it as it is now. Also made a complete list of all cards I plan to make for this set. Also I reworked all cards of this set, so I hope for some ratings, feedbacks or critiques.Just after I finished reworking, I noticed that deck is always writen with capitalized D T.TI'll have to change this on all cards sooner or later... New added: Mokona Modoki Transportation (The maybe longest effect in Yughioh Card Maker's history O_O) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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