Diefic Sword of Destruction

[Rinkotsu]

 

Lore: This spell card can only be equipped to Warrior Type Monsters. This Spell Card can only be equipped to monsters level 3 or lower. When this card is activated, select 3 Equip Cards that target Warrior Type Monsters only from your hand, deck, graveyard or on you side of the field, and send them out of play. The monster who is equipped with this card gain 2500 Attack. If this card is sent to the graveyard, the controller of this card loses 2000 life points.

 

Ehh, I tried my best with this one but Getting the Termonology right is so difficult. I'd like your honest opinion on it and if you could, maybe help me clean this up or word it better. I knew what I wanted to do with this card:

 

-I wanted it to only affect warriors

-I wanted it to only affect level 3 or lower monsters.

-To activate, it needed three equip cards that affect warriors (like lightning blade and fusion blade muramasa etc.) to be sent out of play.

-It gives 2500 atk points to the monster.

-If its destroyed, the user loses 200 life points.

[AlchemistVikuta]

When this card is activated, remove 3 Equip Cards that target Warrior-Type Monsters that you control from play. This card can only be equipped to Warrior-Type Monsters Level 3 or lower. The monster equipped with this card gains 2500 ATK. If this card is destroyed, the controller of this card takes 2000 damage.

[Rinkotsu]

lol that works. I see that made a typo but how is it overall?