lugia61617 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 I have already decided on continuing my "Jaden" cards and am no longer in need for comments. -END- PS: I would delete this thread but the site won't allow me.:? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommers2008 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 i say make them but don't just form pictures of most of his cards together yea maybe some like this but not every card... but do make it i'm looking forward to seeing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Hello, hello... A Jaden-themed set you say? I don't know, but I would probably like to see more to confirm. As for this card: -Grammar: 7.5/10 (I noticed about 5 errors. "destroyed as a result of battle" is now "destroyed by battle" and "card with "Neo-Spacian" in its card name" is simply "If a "Neo-Spacian" monster is" to reflect on the fact that "Neo-Spacian" monsters are an archetype. "inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" should be "inflict 500 damage to your opponent.". Otherwise, there aren't so many faults.)---Errors: (Other errors include the fact that you need to capitalize "Graveyard" and "Life Points".) Effect: 8.75/10 (I like the effect, but maybe you should limit the effect abit, maybe making it so if your "Neo-Spacian" monsters are destroyed, your opponent takes 500 Life Point plunge. Otherwise, it would devastate other "Neo-Spacian" decks.) Overall: 8.5/10 (Well done. I personally would like to see more cards of this theme. Good luck.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted December 30, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 Hello' date=' hello... A Jaden-themed set you say? I don't know, but I would probably like to see more to confirm. As for this card: -Grammar: 7.5/10 (I noticed about 5 errors. "destroyed as a result of battle" is now "destroyed by battle" and "card with "Neo-Spacian" in its card name" is simply "If a "Neo-Spacian" monster is" to reflect on the fact that "Neo-Spacian" monsters are an archetype. "inflict 500 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points" should be "inflict 500 damage to your opponent.". Otherwise, there aren't so many faults.)---Errors: (Other errors include the fact that you need to capitalize "Graveyard" and "Life Points".) Effect: 8.75/10 (I like the effect, but maybe you should limit the effect abit, maybe making it so if your "Neo-Spacian" monsters are destroyed, your opponent takes 500 Life Point plunge. Otherwise, it would devastate other "Neo-Spacian" decks.) Overall: 8.5/10 (Well done. I personally would like to see more cards of this theme. Good luck.)[/quote'] ok, I'll make a few changes. but I find it too difficult to work on the OCG. I'll make sure the life point effect is decreased.Also, I am not too familliar with the updated OCG. I just make cards with the grammar how I recall it.i say make them but don't just form pictures of most of his cards together yea maybe some like this but not every card... but do make it i'm looking forward to seeing it it's just a pilot card. I am not a good artist with a pen, so ready-made cards merged on photoshop has given me best results...:-( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted December 30, 2008 Report Share Posted December 30, 2008 http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-51154.html <--- This is the OCG Grammar thread. It will teach you everything you need to know about the newer Grammar. However, "Release" and "Advance Summon" are not going to be in the TCG anytime soon, so if at all used, you should continue using "Tribute" and "Tribute Summon" respectively. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 i say make them but don't just form pictures of most of his cards together yea maybe some like this but not every card... but do make it i'm looking forward to seeing it like I said' date=' it is a pilot card, but here's a card I created (not Jaden-themed) that I actually drew the picture for:[img']http://img370.imageshack.us/img370/9408/186831qw2.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 some OCG errors in 1st card....in 2nd its Special Summoned...otherwise for both cards ill give it and 8/10 cuz you are still a new member and they're very good cards for beginners so i know that you will be a very good cardmaker! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 some OCG errors in 1st card....in 2nd its Special Summoned...otherwise for both cards ill give it and 8/10 cuz you are still a new member and they're very good cards for beginners so i know that you will be a very good cardmaker! you weren't supposed to rate/comment on the 2nd card. that was just a demonstration of my (rather poor in my view) drawings... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conrestor Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 try doing some more then we can make a better decision Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 graveyard=Graveyard. Card is a little OP'd. I mean, a chrysalis dolphin that can't be destroyed and gets a powerful effect, or worse. A Marine Dolphin or Marine Neos that can't be destroyed by battle with a killer effect!!! *shivers* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lugia61617 Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 graveyard=Graveyard. Card is a little OP'd. I mean' date=' a chrysalis dolphin that can't be destroyed and gets a powerful effect, or worse. A Marine Dolphin or Marine Neos that can't be destroyed by battle with a killer effect!!! *shivers*[/quote'] er...well, I have to edit it again...this makes me feel like an idiot...:-(I AM going to alter the value of damge dealt to the opponent to 200, but the capitals...ugh! some of the OCG errors people point out...it maddens me! please, stop pointing out every little mistake *groans* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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